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- Idyllic -

The soul becomes peaceful
                                 at the first breath of spring
                         The clouds float effortlessly and easily
                                 under the whole firmament
                                lets me drift along in wonder

                            Soft white chubby newborn lambs
                        as angelic children with fluttering ribbons
                                 fur dressed in pretzel spin
                           Intoxicated where the seconds tick by

                             The stream runs rippling by the mill
                        in lively laughter and passionate happiness
                                 lovely and idyllic to the eye


      
                                            01.03.2023
                                    Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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                                    I - words - Poetry Contest
                             Sponsored by: Constance La France 
                                       3rd place in the contest

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Robertina B. Date: 4/27/2023 5:24:00 AM Really enjoyed your write, Sunshine!! Positive, refreshing, and definitely uplifting.. Beautiful visuals as well.. Many blessings to you, my friend! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/28/2023 2:08:00 PM - Thank you very much, Robertina :) - hugs

Constance La France Date: 4/3/2023 4:39:00 PM Sunshine, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! Nice image ! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/28/2023 2:07:00 PM - Thank you very much, Constance :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/7/2023 7:14:00 AM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/picture. Hugs. Have a great day................... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/9/2023 7:56:00 AM - Thank you very much, Paula :) - hugs

Joe Dimino Date: 3/4/2023 7:18:00 AM Wonderful portrait of peace and contentment. Lovely writing! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/9/2023 7:56:00 AM - Thank you very much, Joe :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes Date: 3/3/2023 8:31:00 PM umm its ummm Yes its Idyllic. Just Lovely Anne-Lise Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/9/2023 7:55:00 AM - Thank you very much, Wendy :) - hugs

Fin Chuuk Date: 3/3/2023 7:53:00 PM WOW!! This is a masterpiece of art, Ms. Sunshine. Truly beautiful! :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/9/2023 7:55:00 AM - Thank you very much, Fin :) - hugs

Thompson Emate Date: 3/3/2023 7:48:00 PM A lovely poem. I love the metaphors. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/9/2023 7:55:00 AM - Thank you very much, Thompson :) - hugs

Beryl Edmonds Date: 3/3/2023 5:38:00 PM A poem as lovely as the first breath of Spring Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your placement in Constance’s contest… Belle :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/9/2023 7:54:00 AM - Thank you very much, Belle :) - hugs

David Kavanagh Date: 3/3/2023 1:54:00 PM The clouds float effortlessly and easily under the whole firmament, a beautiful stand out line for me Anne-Lise, smooth soothing poetry, best for contest, cheers David Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/9/2023 7:54:00 AM - Thank you very much, David :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 3/3/2023 10:17:00 AM The poem is abounding in peace, beauty and contentment, as is the picture. Loved it! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/3/2023 12:54:00 PM - Evelyn, many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Harry Horsman Date: 3/3/2023 6:29:00 AM truly wonderful poetry, Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/3/2023 12:54:00 PM - Thank you very much, glad you liked it Harry :) - hugs

Gershon Wolf Date: 3/2/2023 7:31:00 PM 'pretzel spin' - that's a new one for me. Never looked at lambs that way before! Kudos, Gershon Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/3/2023 12:54:00 PM - The next time you see a little lamb .... think of pretzel spin, Gershon :) - Many thanks ... greatly appreciate your comment :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/2/2023 1:20:00 PM A work of art masterfully painted by your pen, dearest friend, Anne-Lise! A Fave. Blessings. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/3/2023 12:51:00 PM - Your fave means a lot to me, many thanks for the lovely comment Demetrios :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/2/2023 10:46:00 AM Lovely imagery, my friend! Love your chubby lambs! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/3/2023 12:50:00 PM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Kim :) - hugs

Joanna Daniel Date: 3/1/2023 7:17:00 PM A lovely place to be in, Anne-lise, you have excelled:) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/3/2023 12:49:00 PM - Jo, many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Valsa George Date: 3/1/2023 6:04:00 PM Such an idyllic and lovely scene you have painted, dear Smile ! Spring in all its beauty is paraded. All the Best, dear friend. Love and hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/3/2023 12:49:00 PM - Thank you very much for your kind comment, Valsa :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 3/1/2023 3:55:00 PM Your poetry couldn't be any more idealistic than this little lamb. So adorable and sweet Sunshine ! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/3/2023 12:48:00 PM - Thank you very much for your lovely comment, Vie Rose :) - hugs

Heidi Sands Date: 3/1/2023 1:07:00 PM This is so beautiful. Great writing and great line fur dressed in pretzel spin. A Fave for me. Peaceful. :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/3/2023 12:47:00 PM - Many thanks for your lovely comment and your fave on my poem, Heidi :) - hugs

Daniel Turner Date: 3/1/2023 12:34:00 PM You had me after the first line, Anne. This is a lovely little poem and I hope it does well. Good luck:) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/2/2023 1:42:00 AM - Thank you very much, glad you liked it Daniel :) - hugs

Panagiota Romios Date: 3/1/2023 11:15:00 AM Your poem is like a dream. Peaceful, calm and full of sunshine~ just like you. Pangie Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/1/2023 11:32:00 AM - A little breath of spring... many thanks for the kind comment, Pangie :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/1/2023 8:20:00 AM Beautiful poem, a joy to read--you convey lovely images and vibes of spring, Anne-Lies. Win BIG with this gem! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/1/2023 8:34:00 AM - It's been 14 days since I saw the first lambs this year ... (very early) ... many thanks for the lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar Date: 3/1/2023 7:46:00 AM Your imagery is of the first quality. Best for a win. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/1/2023 8:28:00 AM - Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs

Sotto Poet Date: 3/1/2023 7:43:00 AM You have produced such a lovely metaphor out of nature and poetry,  Anne-Lise.  Your poem is excellently made, and your thoughts are articulated very well. Enjoyed. GL and hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/1/2023 8:27:00 AM - Many thanks, Las ... greatly appreciate your comment :) - hugs