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The soul becomes peaceful at the first breath of spring The clouds float effortlessly and easily under the whole firmament lets me drift along in wonder Soft white chubby newborn lambs as angelic children with fluttering ribbons fur dressed in pretzel spin Intoxicated where the seconds tick by The stream runs rippling by the mill in lively laughter and passionate happiness lovely and idyllic to the eye 01.03.2023 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved I - words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France 3rd place in the contest

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Robertina B.

Date: 4/27/2023 5:24:00 AM

Really enjoyed your write, Sunshine!! Positive, refreshing, and definitely uplifting.. Beautiful visuals as well.. Many blessings to you, my friend!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/28/2023 2:08:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Robertina :) - hugs

Constance La France

Date: 4/3/2023 4:39:00 PM

Sunshine, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! Nice image !

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/28/2023 2:07:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Constance :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/7/2023 7:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/picture. Hugs. Have a great day...................

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/9/2023 7:56:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Paula :) - hugs

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/4/2023 7:18:00 AM

Wonderful portrait of peace and contentment. Lovely writing!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/9/2023 7:56:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Joe :) - hugs

Di11y Da11y

Date: 3/3/2023 11:42:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your win

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/9/2023 7:55:00 AM

- Thank you very much, D.D. :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/3/2023 8:31:00 PM

umm its ummm Yes its Idyllic. Just Lovely Anne-Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/9/2023 7:55:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Wendy :) - hugs

Fin Chuuk

Date: 3/3/2023 7:53:00 PM

WOW!! This is a masterpiece of art, Ms. Sunshine. Truly beautiful! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/9/2023 7:55:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Fin :) - hugs

Thompson Emate

Date: 3/3/2023 7:48:00 PM

A lovely poem. I love the metaphors.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/9/2023 7:55:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Thompson :) - hugs

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/3/2023 5:38:00 PM

A poem as lovely as the first breath of Spring Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your placement in Constance’s contest… Belle :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/9/2023 7:54:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Belle :) - hugs

David Kavanagh

Date: 3/3/2023 1:54:00 PM

The clouds float effortlessly and easily under the whole firmament, a beautiful stand out line for me Anne-Lise, smooth soothing poetry, best for contest, cheers David

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/9/2023 7:54:00 AM

- Thank you very much, David :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/3/2023 10:17:00 AM

The poem is abounding in peace, beauty and contentment, as is the picture. Loved it!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/3/2023 12:54:00 PM

- Evelyn, many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/3/2023 6:29:00 AM

truly wonderful poetry,

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/3/2023 12:54:00 PM

- Thank you very much, glad you liked it Harry :) - hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/2/2023 7:31:00 PM

'pretzel spin' - that's a new one for me. Never looked at lambs that way before! Kudos, Gershon

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/3/2023 12:54:00 PM

- The next time you see a little lamb .... think of pretzel spin, Gershon :) - Many thanks ... greatly appreciate your comment :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/2/2023 1:20:00 PM

A work of art masterfully painted by your pen, dearest friend, Anne-Lise! A Fave. Blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/3/2023 12:51:00 PM

- Your fave means a lot to me, many thanks for the lovely comment Demetrios :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/2/2023 10:46:00 AM

Lovely imagery, my friend! Love your chubby lambs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/3/2023 12:50:00 PM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Kim :) - hugs

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/1/2023 7:17:00 PM

A lovely place to be in, Anne-lise, you have excelled:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/3/2023 12:49:00 PM

- Jo, many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Valsa George

Date: 3/1/2023 6:04:00 PM

Such an idyllic and lovely scene you have painted, dear Smile ! Spring in all its beauty is paraded. All the Best, dear friend. Love and hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/3/2023 12:49:00 PM

- Thank you very much for your kind comment, Valsa :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/1/2023 3:55:00 PM

Your poetry couldn't be any more idealistic than this little lamb. So adorable and sweet Sunshine !

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/3/2023 12:48:00 PM

- Thank you very much for your lovely comment, Vie Rose :) - hugs

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/1/2023 1:07:00 PM

This is so beautiful. Great writing and great line fur dressed in pretzel spin. A Fave for me. Peaceful. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/3/2023 12:47:00 PM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment and your fave on my poem, Heidi :) - hugs

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/1/2023 12:34:00 PM

You had me after the first line, Anne. This is a lovely little poem and I hope it does well. Good luck:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/2/2023 1:42:00 AM

- Thank you very much, glad you liked it Daniel :) - hugs

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/1/2023 11:15:00 AM

Your poem is like a dream. Peaceful, calm and full of sunshine~ just like you. Pangie

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/1/2023 11:32:00 AM

- A little breath of spring... many thanks for the kind comment, Pangie :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/1/2023 8:20:00 AM

Beautiful poem, a joy to read--you convey lovely images and vibes of spring, Anne-Lies. Win BIG with this gem!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/1/2023 8:34:00 AM

- It's been 14 days since I saw the first lambs this year ... (very early) ... many thanks for the lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs

Di11y Da11y

Date: 3/1/2023 7:47:00 AM

Lovely! I keep starting an I letter poem and abandoning it. Hopefully I'll get some inspiration soon :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/1/2023 8:32:00 AM

- My third attempt at the letter I ... but, I like these challenges ... many thanks for reading my proposal, D.D. :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/1/2023 7:46:00 AM

Your imagery is of the first quality. Best for a win.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/1/2023 8:28:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/1/2023 7:43:00 AM

You have produced such a lovely metaphor out of nature and poetry, Anne-Lise. Your poem is excellently made, and your thoughts are articulated very well. Enjoyed. GL and hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/1/2023 8:27:00 AM

- Many thanks, Las ... greatly appreciate your comment :) - hugs