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- Haiku X 82 - My Family -

The great family a lovely sense of closeness A frame around love Father and mother a dream of a family Their sons and daughters Providing good care family members and friends A stable childhood One generations valuable important A perfect pleasure http://www.howmanysyllables.com - (5-7-5) 03.05.2016 - Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 6/16/2016 11:58:00 AM

Very beautifully painted Haiku, Anne- Lise! A 7!I enjoyed this very charming family painting with words, dear friend.Best to you!:)) Sending you my love and prayers!Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In his light God bless you always!:))Hugs!D

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/16/2016 12:06:00 PM

- Thank you :) - Very much appreciated a 7 on my family haiku, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/7/2016 8:50:00 AM

I love it. Families are importable stable and reliable. hugs x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/7/2016 9:04:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Casarah - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jesse Day

Date: 5/6/2016 4:03:00 AM

Nicely written - good feel. Felt a wave of overcoming obstacles in conclusion -

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/6/2016 6:43:00 AM

- Jesse, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2016 8:05:00 PM

Nice one. I loved that phrase "a frame around love!"

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/6/2016 2:55:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/5/2016 9:55:00 AM

Such a lovely string of Haikus about your dear family, Anne-Lise. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/5/2016 12:00:00 PM

- Sandra, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 5/4/2016 12:46:00 PM

A very nice look and family and their importance in our lives....lovely A-L

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/4/2016 1:41:00 PM

- Tim, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 5/4/2016 12:22:00 PM

Hello Dear Anne-Lise, Excellent Haiku!! Very well-done and quite expressive. TR!! (By the way, I just posted "Fickle" today and "Turbidity" a couple of days ago, if you have time to drop by to take a read of them.) Hope all is going better too!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/4/2016 1:40:00 PM

- I always have time for my friends, Gary :) - Thank you very much :) - Very much appreciated a 7 on my family haiku :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Manmath Dalei

Date: 5/4/2016 7:36:00 AM

Anne, Impressive haiku. Specially 1st stanza is very powerful. Best wishes for the contest. A 7 from me.........//:) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/4/2016 7:52:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Manmath - Very much appreciated a 7 on my family :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jeralyn Tolliver

Date: 5/4/2016 7:35:00 AM

A nice picture in a sturdy frame. Great way to express family.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/4/2016 7:51:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Jeralyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Moon Flower

Date: 5/4/2016 5:21:00 AM

Sending you a big hug. Opss, I wasn't around for a few days. And...you got an awesome haiku, my friend, as always!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/4/2016 6:34:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Moon Flower:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 5/4/2016 2:44:00 AM

Excellent haiku about family. All the best for the contest. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/4/2016 6:33:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/3/2016 3:26:00 PM

Beautiful haiku on family. Good luck in the contest. Loved always my lovely lovely friend, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/4/2016 6:31:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Walter T. Ashe

Date: 5/3/2016 3:16:00 PM

The realism of Haikus is amazing and with this one on Family, you have written an amazing Love Haiku! You've a loving Family!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/4/2016 6:31:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Walter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/3/2016 12:12:00 PM

home is where the heart is! ...i do relish your splendid words of harmony and love, dear anne... happy day with huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/3/2016 12:16:00 PM

- .... and love is where your family is ! - Thank you very much, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 5/3/2016 9:48:00 AM

Derived 'a perfect pleasure' on reading the haiku on family...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/3/2016 9:54:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 5/3/2016 8:37:00 AM

Sunshine, nicely penned for the contest, best of luck and I am loving them 7 ~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/3/2016 8:57:00 AM

- Thank you very much, B.W. :) - Very much appreciated a 7 on my family :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/3/2016 7:03:00 AM

One better than the other and all together a splendid whole make, dear Sunshine Smile! A seven for each!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/3/2016 8:56:00 AM

- Thank you very much, dear Demetrios - Very much appreciated a 7 on my family :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/3/2016 6:56:00 AM

a strong collection Ann.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/3/2016 8:53:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Lenny - hugs // Anne-Lise :)