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               Christmas sparkling lights
               Weak brightness through tearful eyes
               Unexpected death






              27.12.2014
              A-L Andresen
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Date: 3/15/2015 3:13:00 PM
Powerful, amazing what can be conveyed in a few lines, nice write.
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Date: 3/15/2015 3:15:00 PM
- Suburban, thanks for visiting and comments - xx // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/16/2015 10:37:00 AM
There aren't words that can be spoken. When at Christmas, your heart is broken. Your Haiku shines deep and dark. At a time when, what is that? Hark. We hear the angels sing. Peace. :)
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Date: 1/16/2015 12:17:00 PM
- Robert, thanks for visiting and comments - peace // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/4/2015 12:45:00 PM
Anne-Lise, Sorry for not responding here sooner. I'm getting caught up with my correspondence. This is an excellent Haiku write. The imagery is quite compelling and to the point. Bravo!! A "7" and a FAV from me!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 1/4/2015 1:30:00 PM
- Thanks for the "fav", a 7, visiting and comments, Gary - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/2/2015 8:53:00 AM
Makes every moment especially Christmas memories so special...for we never know what tomorrow brings....such a special poem Anne Lise
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Date: 1/2/2015 8:56:00 AM
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Date: 12/31/2014 10:04:00 AM
WISH YOU HAPPY NEW YEAR ANNE-LISE. LIVE ON CLOUD NINE.---rajat
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Date: 1/1/2015 5:33:00 AM
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Date: 12/31/2014 4:46:00 AM
Dear Anne-Lise: Thank you for the support my friend. Here's wishing you and your loved ones A Happy New Year filled with peace, joy and love. All my best wishes on the last day of 2014, Leon.
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Date: 12/31/2014 6:11:00 AM
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Date: 12/30/2014 2:33:00 PM
Brilliant. I felt the words at the Church on 25th December. Thank you very much dear friend.
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Date: 12/31/2014 6:11:00 AM
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Date: 12/29/2014 3:33:00 PM
sadness at Xmas. it happens more than we know!!
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Date: 12/30/2014 2:59:00 AM
- True, Andrea - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/28/2014 3:23:00 PM
Death comes and the sparkle is suddenly gone. Very well transmitted image, Anne Lise. Glad to hear your dad is not as bad as he was. Take care. #7 /x/ paul
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Date: 12/28/2014 3:50:00 PM
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Date: 12/28/2014 12:59:00 PM
this is very expressive of season, tres bien
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Date: 12/28/2014 3:49:00 PM
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Date: 12/28/2014 7:29:00 AM
This is a tremendous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this fantastic poem this morning! You have written a magnificent poem here Anne Lise! What a terrific piece, great Work!!
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Date: 12/28/2014 7:41:00 AM
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Date: 12/28/2014 4:57:00 AM
Hope it is just an excellent Haiku and nothing more, dear Anne-Lise!
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Date: 12/28/2014 5:05:00 AM
- My father was so ill, we thought he would die now at Christmas - but now he has become a little better (yesterday) - death always comes unexpectedly - Dear friend Demetrios, thanks for visiting and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/28/2014 1:56:00 AM
EXCELLENT!!!
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Date: 12/28/2014 4:26:00 AM
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Date: 12/27/2014 6:45:00 PM
Your haiku reminds us that as we celebrate a birth we also mourn a death. May you find love and warmth as you grieve the lost. Hugs and love from me.
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Date: 12/28/2014 4:26:00 AM
- Life: birth to death - David, thanks for visiting and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/27/2014 6:10:00 PM
Oh! it's very sad, my lovely friend. It already happened in our state, 64 innocent people have been killed by terrorists here on the eve of Christmas. Heart paining situation that's. I am with you, my lovely friend of always. Loved always,bl
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Date: 12/28/2014 4:22:00 AM
- Yeah, I read about it ..... horrible killing! - My thoughts to their families - Thanks for visiting and comments dear friend Bl - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/27/2014 4:09:00 PM
OH.....So sad. :( Death is sad at anytime but especially so during this season. My heart is with you, dear. Hugs
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Date: 12/28/2014 4:23:00 AM
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Date: 12/27/2014 2:59:00 PM
I hope that death hasn't come to your home or family during this Christmas season..That seems like it would be extra hard on a family..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 12/27/2014 3:20:00 PM
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Date: 12/27/2014 2:04:00 PM
i pray the angels look over you anne lise bless you dear friend
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Date: 12/27/2014 2:07:00 PM
- Thank you my friend Liam - I love angels :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/27/2014 12:48:00 PM
So sad on Christmas....my prayers to you and your loved ones......hugs Tim
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Date: 12/27/2014 12:51:00 PM
- As Jan says: "Always sad news that this time of year" - Tim,thanks for visiting and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/27/2014 12:23:00 PM
Always sad news at this time of year - poignant write my friend:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/27/2014 12:47:00 PM
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Date: 12/27/2014 12:21:00 PM
ohh anne... so sad and beautiful.. your last line was a change of scene.. well done and best of sunday to you.. huggs
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Date: 12/27/2014 12:46:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and comments Nette - oxox // Anne-Lise :)