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18.04.2025
Anne-Lise Andresen
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newly-sprung birch trees green breath woven from the hush - pollen ... nose tingles

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/19/2025 1:32:00 PM

Anne-Lise! What a great title that perfectly describes new birch leaves and I can hear their hush as we have five birch in our backyard. One is outside my office window with a hummingbird feeder. I love to watch the seasons dance through our birch grove. Spring must be glorious in Norway especially with the trees coming back. Sending you Easter joy and blessings! Hugs and prayers.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/19/2025 12:20:00 PM

Anne-Lise, thanks for highlighting another beautiful scene for me to enjoy. A real pleasure! Smiles!!

Jay Narain

Date: 4/19/2025 11:35:00 AM

Nice haiku.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/19/2025 11:05:00 AM

Anne-Lise, nicely penned, birch trees are my favorite tree. -hugs

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/19/2025 6:50:00 AM

Great mood right -- Just sneezed twice...but the read was worth every divine tickle.

Ink Empress

Date: 4/19/2025 4:44:00 AM

Ah it seems pollen is getting to so many right now, hope you are staying safe from pollen, and i love this haiku! And the picture too youv used here! You do these so well dear anne lise! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 4/18/2025 7:58:00 PM

Physical effects of nature on the body in early spring.Very nice.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/18/2025 2:36:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your Haiku write. Great tree picture. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Hugs... Have a great/blessed Easter Day........

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/18/2025 1:55:00 PM

Lovely image, thankfully pollen doesn't affect me but I know some struggle with it. Happy Easter. Tom

Joseph May

Date: 4/18/2025 1:39:00 PM

Lovely haiku Anne, love the last line, hugs

I Am Anaya

Date: 4/18/2025 1:07:00 PM

Pollen is for the birds and bees, not us. Spring allergies. I see the ears! Loved it Anne-Lise!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/18/2025 11:15:00 AM

this reminds me of spring fever and allergies...nonetheless, what a remarkable 'ku which captues the season's winsome atmosphere, anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/18/2025 11:53:00 AM

- Pollen allergy, which many struggle with in the spring - Thank you very much for your comment, Nette :) - hugs