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- Haiku X 32 - Autumn -

Time begins again When I look at the birch tree Playing with crayons Oh, so sour apples To the wet ground falling leaves Old tree in the yard 04.09.2014 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved - Thanks for my 3rd place in your contest, Francine :) -

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/31/2016 7:01:00 PM

Excellent pen Anne-Lise!Beautifully painted Haiku dear friend.I enjoyed it!:))Great imagery!A7!Sending you love and prayers.Take good care!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)Hugs!D.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/1/2016 3:07:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/11/2014 5:56:00 PM

you did marvelously with these, Anne lise. Congratulations.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/12/2014 5:42:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and congrats, Andrea - Always fun to be on the winning list :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Trichet

Date: 10/10/2014 7:41:00 PM

Splendid light you have cast upon this Autumn Contest Anne-Lise, loved it...and warm congrats

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/11/2014 5:26:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and congrats, Mark - Always fun to be on the winning list :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/9/2014 8:39:00 PM

Congrats on this fine haiku winning for you!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2014 3:26:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and congrats, Robert - Always fun to be on the winning list :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

John Lawless

Date: 10/9/2014 7:11:00 PM

Beautiful subtle Haiku, Anne Lise. Well deserving of the high placement.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2014 3:26:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and congrats, John - Always fun to be on the winning list :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/9/2014 7:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Anne Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2014 3:26:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and congrats, Brenda - Always fun to be on the winning list :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Faye Gibson

Date: 10/9/2014 5:17:00 PM

Love, love this, Anne-Lise. Just gorgeous. Congrats.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2014 3:25:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and congrats, Faye - Always fun to be on the winning list :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/9/2014 11:45:00 AM

Beautiful haiku, Anne-Lise! Congratulations on your wonderful win in Francine's contest. Love, Carolyn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/9/2014 11:49:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and congrats, Carolyn - Always fun to be on the winning list :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/9/2014 11:03:00 AM

congrats Anne Lise, beautifully done , I very much enjoyed your haiku

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/9/2014 11:14:00 AM

- Thanks for my 3rd place in your contest, Francine :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mohan Chutani

Date: 10/9/2014 10:32:00 AM

Congrats Anne, for lovely win on your Haikus on Autumn.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/9/2014 11:13:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and congrats, Mohan - Always fun to be on the winning list :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/9/2014 9:37:00 AM

Anne-Lise, congratulations on your win for your very imaginative Haikus! Sandra

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/9/2014 11:13:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and congrats, Sandra - Always fun to be on the winning list :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/9/2014 9:09:00 AM

Congratulations Anne-Lise, on your high placed win I really like this combination of Haikus.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/9/2014 11:12:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and congrats, Maurice - Always fun to be on the winning list :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Earl Schumacker

Date: 10/9/2014 8:46:00 AM

Hi Anne Lise, This is a very imaginative creation. I enjoyed both very much. Nice win. Good for you. Keep up the good work. Have a great day. Take care. Earl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/9/2014 11:12:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and congrats, Earl - Always fun to be on the winning list :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/9/2014 4:08:00 AM

dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/9/2014 5:37:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and congrats, Jan - Always fun to be on the winning list :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Harley White

Date: 9/25/2014 9:51:00 AM

Lovely... wonderful image of the tree playing with crayons...!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2014 12:09:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Harley :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 9/8/2014 8:40:00 PM

I would agree with Andrea about the caps; but it's your haiku. Love the first one as school is starting again and a new box of crayons has a special meaning for many of us oldies. I can sense that the artist is at work here, the second one is a natural follow up.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/9/2014 2:29:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Reason :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/8/2014 12:32:00 PM

Nice description on these haiku. Fall is approaching fast. Just started pulling things out of the garden. It was not a nice year for the veggies. To wet and then to hot and now wet again. Tomatoes rotted on the vines. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/8/2014 12:37:00 PM

- We have had an unusually beautiful summer this year in Norway -- I send you a box of tomatoes :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, dear friend Phyllis :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/6/2014 2:24:00 PM

I play with paint and colors when able, anne... is autumn approaching?.. lovely saturday to you...huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/7/2014 4:03:00 AM

.... huggs :))

Edward Orozco

Date: 9/5/2014 11:22:00 PM

Beautiful piece!! =) you are an amazing writer. - Edward

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/6/2014 3:40:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Edward :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/5/2014 8:51:00 PM

one little suggestion, don't capitalize the lines!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/5/2014 8:50:00 PM

Anne lise, I think this is the best I ever saw you do a haiku. the first one is REALLY good and I like the second one as well. If it is for Francine, I hope she places it. I would place this one for sure!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/6/2014 3:38:00 AM

- Really nice words from you, Andrea .... you know : - "practice makes perfect" :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/5/2014 11:54:00 AM

it's Friday and I hope you are playing with crayons, anne.. huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/5/2014 12:00:00 PM

- I play with crayons everyday, Nette :))) - Happy weekend !!!

Monterey Sirak

Date: 9/5/2014 7:36:00 AM

Such lovely images of autumn. Your poem makes me long even more for the season to get started.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/5/2014 8:20:00 AM

- Autumn has arrived in Norway - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Monterey :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/4/2014 6:44:00 PM

nice one, anne lise! autumn is my favorite season and you've written a wonderful fall poem here...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/5/2014 2:18:00 AM

- Spring and summer is my favorite season, Ilene .... however, autumn is also beautiful - Thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/4/2014 2:09:00 PM

Fall can be delightful. Hope you are having a great day! Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/4/2014 2:27:00 PM

- Yes, it's a beautiful autumn day right here with me .... hope everything is fine with you too Debbie - Thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)