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10.07.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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-J - Words - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

1st place in the contest

- Haiku X 283 - July -

                                       let the magic live
                                    july sunset peach revel -
                                       twinkle in your eye

                                      redemptive poppies
                               swaying lace leaves flare softly -
                                          an invitation

                                        evening's last rays
                                   bride in orange velvet veil -
                                        freckles on the nose
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Date: 7/21/2023 9:56:00 AM
Anne-Lise, beautiful haiku and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge J Words, and I like the image too !
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Date: 7/16/2023 10:19:00 PM
Wonderful lines from one of my all-time favorite haiku artists. "Let the magic live", indeed. Such artistry. Congratulations for your win! Hugs ~ John
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Date: 7/16/2023 2:27:00 PM
Wow!! Congratulations on this great winning work in the contest. Thank you for sharing these lines and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 7/14/2023 4:34:00 PM
So gorgeous. Way to go!!
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Date: 7/11/2023 10:14:00 PM
Wow.... Lovely! Congratulations Anne on your first place win ! Hugs !
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Date: 7/11/2023 12:42:00 PM
congratulations dear poet, beautiful images...swaying lace leaves flare softly...an incredible line my friend
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Date: 7/11/2023 4:52:00 AM
Just breathtaking imagery Anne-Lise! Lovely to read this morning! Happy Tuesday!
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Date: 7/11/2023 3:21:00 AM
Great haiku chain on July. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/10/2023 11:00:00 PM
A truly outstanding set of Haiku Anne-Lise. Totally enjoyable. So colorful, (and it makes me a lil hungry too).
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Date: 7/10/2023 3:52:00 PM
The magic of July lives in your words + images. Congratulations! Brian
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Date: 7/10/2023 3:41:00 PM
Pretty colors and imagery!
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Date: 7/10/2023 10:52:00 AM
It's really quite brilliant dear poetess Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 7/10/2023 9:13:00 AM
Anne-Lise, it is my practice to AVOID using the word “beautiful” in my comments. But. Here you’ve written a beautiful poem IMHO. A FAV. Your work is taking over my Fav list! You gotta stop that or i’ll have to quit writing poems. Well, then again, don’t stop…Life Needs your poetry! Throwing roses over your feet! sally
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/10/2023 11:04:00 AM
I agree Sally, her haiku are outstanding I love Anne-Lise's work too:-)
Date: 7/10/2023 4:02:00 AM
Great capture of the beautiful moments, Anne-Lise.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2023 12:42:00 PM
- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs
Date: 7/9/2023 10:00:00 PM
Very summery! Well done!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/10/2023 3:50:00 AM
- Thank you, Joe :) - hugs
Date: 7/9/2023 9:33:00 PM
Stunning haiku with a wonderful picture. So much imagery in your haikus. If for a contest, best of luck. Hugs Anne Lise xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/10/2023 3:49:00 AM
- Thank you, Victor :) - hugs
Date: 7/9/2023 8:31:00 PM
Lovely poetry in Haiku form Anne-Lise and a beautiful poppy picture too… Belle
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/10/2023 3:49:00 AM
- Thank you, Belle :) - hugs
Date: 7/9/2023 7:53:00 PM
A poem of exquisite beauty evoking memories of idyllic summer weddings. Good luck with the contest
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/10/2023 3:49:00 AM
- Thank you, Las :) - hugs
Date: 7/9/2023 6:24:00 PM
Delightful images in your haiku, Anne-Lise! Blessings, Kim M
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/10/2023 3:49:00 AM
- Thank you, Kim :) - hugs
Date: 7/9/2023 5:18:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem that reminds us of those summer weddings.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/10/2023 3:48:00 AM
- Thank you, David :) - hugs
Date: 7/9/2023 3:35:00 PM
beautiful imagery and warm feeling in these great Haikus,
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/10/2023 3:48:00 AM
- Thank you, Eve :) - hugs
Date: 7/9/2023 3:17:00 PM
absolutely exquisite and I adore that image Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/10/2023 3:48:00 AM
- Thank you, Jan :) - hugs
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