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- winter night - trickling streams will freeze mice sleep under the pine root - chasing shooting stars 11.12.2022 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 12/12/2022 10:05:00 AM
How marvelous a Haiku, my dearest friend, Anne-Lise. I love it! Hugs xxx
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Date: 12/12/2022 7:12:00 AM
This sensual haiku captures the chill AND warmth of a winter night for me, because I think of seeing shooting stars as a summer night think, but yes, there is much to them of frigid outer space too. Great Aha moment presented here! Best wishes! sally
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Date: 12/12/2022 1:18:00 AM
Great imagery. Did the mouse escape? :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/12/2022 6:53:00 AM
:))) ... yes, it's still alive, Victor :) - hugs
Date: 12/11/2022 7:28:00 PM
very nice one for winter, Sunshine
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/12/2022 6:54:00 AM
- many thanks, Andrea :) - hugs
Date: 12/11/2022 5:49:00 PM
Great imagery, I miss the snow caps on the mountains. Stay warm, Sunshine Smile ~Anaya
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/12/2022 6:55:00 AM
- give me your address... I will send all the snow to you, Anaya :) - hugs
Date: 12/11/2022 3:42:00 PM
Great imagery , Anne-Lise. Many blessings my friend
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Date: 12/12/2022 6:56:00 AM
- Thank you for your comment, Eve :) - hugs
Date: 12/11/2022 2:23:00 PM
Very nice. So pretty. I enjoyed :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/12/2022 6:56:00 AM
- Thank you for your comment, Heidi :) - hugs
Date: 12/11/2022 2:12:00 PM
I like this one. It is very descriptive and expressive. I can feel the emotion of the mice under that root. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/12/2022 6:57:00 AM
- Thank you for your comment, Sara :) - hugs
Date: 12/11/2022 1:41:00 PM
A beautiful winter night and a beautiful poem, Anne-Lise.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/12/2022 6:57:00 AM
- Thank you for your comment, Vijay :) - hugs
Date: 12/11/2022 1:34:00 PM
A chilly scene Anne, we've copped a cold front from Trondheim, snow and ice, they called it the Trondheim Troll lol. Tom
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/11/2022 1:39:00 PM
- Minus 16 degrees in Trondheim this evening ... a troll from Norway :) - hugs
Date: 12/11/2022 1:12:00 PM
Great haiku, Anne-Lise, your imagery shed more beauty on this already wonderful poem.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/11/2022 1:40:00 PM
- thank you very much, Las :) - hugs

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