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"Rainbow Blue Smokey Drops" by Sharon Johnstone: Water drops on the 'Smoke Bush' // Buy prints, posters, canvas and framed wall art directly from thousands of independent working artists at Imagekind.com.


                                        the beauty's effect
                                      I'm actually breathing
                                     rainbow blue dewdrops

                                         close interaction
                               love the earth with all your heart
                                       in the flame of light

                                      some beads on a string
                               is bound to your own bright eyes
                                        a untouched nature










11.01.2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Syllable : 5-7-5

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Date: 1/16/2019 12:56:00 PM
Hi Sunshine Smile, so pretty, magical, flowing poetic art. Haven't mastered Haiku yet , still a challenge for me. But I admire at how you excel in this form of poetry - beautiful P.D. poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/16/2019 1:12:00 PM
- Haiku poems are one of my favorites, Jennifer :) - ... glad you enjoy them :) - Not difficult ... try one :) - ... Many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/14/2019 10:45:00 AM
Nice series of haiku. One form I have struggled with for some time. love phyl
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Date: 1/14/2019 12:19:00 PM
- You write beautiful haiku poems, dear Phyllis :) - Hauku is a great form I love to write them :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/13/2019 7:30:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work. Very creative use of the Haiku form. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 1/13/2019 11:47:00 PM
- Many thanks, dear Sara :) - I appreciate your kind visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/13/2019 2:38:00 PM
Pure poetry in motion, Dear.
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Date: 1/13/2019 2:43:00 PM
- W.W., thanks for your visit and friendly comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/13/2019 2:27:00 PM
Hi Anne Lise, You excell in the haiku form! These three are just lovely. I enjoyed the read:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/13/2019 2:43:00 PM
- Haiku poems are one of my favorites, Alexis ... glad you enjoy them ... many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/13/2019 10:06:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise. Haiku, it seems a while since I have taken the time to read one of your special Kaiku and here we have a group. It is such a wonderful group of Haiku. Your words create such beautiful images Anne-Lise. I am so glad I dropped by your excellent Haiku today. A most special fave. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 1/13/2019 2:41:00 PM
- Many thanks Mike for your visit, A FAVE (!) and lovely comment :) - Glad you got a new haiku in your collection :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2019 11:56:00 AM
Three briliant haiku Anne Lise, vivid imagery in all of them..
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Date: 1/13/2019 2:38:00 PM
- Thanks, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/11/2019 3:04:00 PM
How lovely all three verses are, Sunshine. Your words compliment the photo so well. Very beautiful! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 1/13/2019 2:37:00 PM
- Many thanks, dear Carolyn :) - I appreciate your kind visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/11/2019 2:48:00 PM
how splendid the whole imagery is, dear anne... wow.. happy huggs!
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Date: 1/13/2019 2:36:00 PM
- Thanks, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/11/2019 2:46:00 PM
Nice imagery Sunshine. Have a nice weekend. Tom.
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Date: 1/13/2019 2:36:00 PM
- Tom, thanks for your visit and friendly comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/11/2019 2:41:00 PM
Hello Sunshine. This is a nice flowing poem with beautiful imagery. It shows us what nature has to offer us if we look.
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Date: 1/13/2019 2:35:00 PM
- I appreciate your kind visit and comment :) - Many thanks, Bette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/11/2019 2:16:00 PM
Oh so beautiful Anne-Lise! :)
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Date: 1/13/2019 2:33:00 PM
- Thanks, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/11/2019 2:13:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Anne-Lise..lovely write.
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Date: 1/13/2019 2:33:00 PM
- Many thanks, Vijay - I appreciate your kind visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)