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Susan Ashley

Date: 2/23/2018 1:28:00 PM

Anne-Lise, this could simply be a beautifully emotional Haiku about a snow storm or it could be a thought provoking and moving poem about overwhelming adversities faced in life.. either way I find it to be deeply compelling and stunning.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/23/2018 2:39:00 PM

- Glad you noticed it ... - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 1/23/2018 11:48:00 AM

Snow falls with great seductive beauty and temptation, but so cold and so dangerous at the same time. Great job, Sunshine. Hugs Eve ~`*

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/23/2018 11:51:00 AM

- Beautiful when it's clean and unused ... white like a bride :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/21/2018 11:50:00 AM

Not a lot of snow here but so very icy as we had freezing rain. Sun is out today so makes me smile. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2018 12:00:00 PM

- Dangerously slippery ... ice and snow :) - Many thanks Phyllis, for your visit and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Swartz

Date: 1/21/2018 8:53:00 AM

A great poem and an even better reminder of why I moved to the desert.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2018 11:13:00 AM

- You are lucky, James :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie

Date: 1/19/2018 12:45:00 PM

as the snow falls down....the whitest Beauty is found....and my eyes just drown....nice haiku anne....;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/19/2018 1:41:00 PM

- Thank you for being my friend, Eric :) - Best wishes and lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mick Talbot

Date: 1/18/2018 5:51:00 PM

Brr, that winter wind chill, tis only my love for nature, and a good haiku that keeps my heart warm. :-) Mick

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/19/2018 1:43:00 PM

- I love nature, Mick ... but can do without snow - Many thanks for your visit and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/18/2018 12:04:00 PM

The emotion impacted by the snow storm! Great first line!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/18/2018 2:47:00 PM

- Lots of snow means lots of work, Kim ... every day shoveling snow ... cold hands and feet - Winter and snow (?) ... no, thanks :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Roy Pett

Date: 1/18/2018 7:44:00 AM

Great Haiku Anne-Lise, parts of the UK have come to a standstill due to snowfall, well written and enjoyed. :))

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/18/2018 7:50:00 AM

- Norwegians can handle a lot of snow, Roy ... you know : "we are born with a skis on our feet " :))) - Many thanks for your visit and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/18/2018 7:26:00 AM

Very philosophical Haiku! A delight to read my friend, Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/18/2018 2:35:00 PM

- Thank you for always encouraging and lovely comment, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams

Date: 1/18/2018 5:24:00 AM

I feel that cold in your brilliant Haiku Anne-Lise. So descriptive in just three lines.....Maria xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/18/2018 2:34:00 PM

- Glad you liked it, Maria :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 1/18/2018 3:25:00 AM

Anne Lise....hello dear. : )

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/18/2018 2:32:00 PM

- Welcome back, my friend Mustapha :) - Nice to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 1/17/2018 10:48:00 PM

Oh, so cold... nicely done, Sunshine, stay warm..Hugs Eve ~`*

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/18/2018 2:29:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/17/2018 6:23:00 PM

oh it sounds like you are in for a harsh spell of weather Anne Lise - take care my friend stay in and keep warm:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/18/2018 2:29:00 PM

- Snow has been reported for days to come ... we'll see how long it will be - Probably there will be rain, slippery and wet :( - Many thanks Jan, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 1/17/2018 6:09:00 PM

snow is quite beautiful and also quite harsh...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/18/2018 2:07:00 AM

- It's beautiful to look at, Frederic ... but I could have been without the cold snow - Many thanks for your visit and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 1/17/2018 5:35:00 PM

Must be really bad there, where I live we hardly get any snow.. Great haiku Anne Lise..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/18/2018 2:24:00 PM

- I'll come with the first plane ... is it okay if I come tomorrow ? :))) - Many thanks for your visit and comment, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/17/2018 5:14:00 PM

You painted that well Anne-Lise..I feel the harsh cold.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/18/2018 2:08:00 AM

- Many thanks Vijay, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2018 3:34:00 PM

Yes, this would be a plight! Anne-Lise, Utah is having it's nicest driest winter in a long time. Meanwhile, the South, which is supposed to be warm, is having SNOW. It's the craziest thing . Is it like this in Europe too, all backwards now?

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/20/2018 12:44:00 PM

- I do not think it's true everything they say ... When nature is broken ... we will not get a new one - hugs :)

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/18/2018 7:53:00 PM

CAn you believe that there are people saying that climate change is something invented?? If they are right, I would say that whoever is thinking up all this crap is doing a mighty fine job of convincing us of it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/18/2018 2:21:00 PM

- We have had mostly green winter in recent years, yes we feel and see the climate change Andrea - Many thanks for your visit and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)