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Whatever we do leaves an imprint; ~ A Tupos (grk) impacted blow. May what we touch be loved:

Time exist in light With hope to mortals given One set of footprints - 13.05.2017 - Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) - Copyright © All Rights Reserved - www.howmanysyllables.com - Haiku 5-7-5

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Date: 5/31/2017 4:35:00 PM
Love this haiku Anne Lise. Never alone for God walks each step along our way. love phyl.
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Date: 6/1/2017 2:00:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and your friendly support, Phyllis :) - Always nice to see you :) - greeting and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/25/2017 7:47:00 AM
A meaningful Haiku Anne-Lise, makes one ponder. I really love it..... Maria 7+
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Date: 5/25/2017 7:55:00 AM
- Many thanks for lovely comments and a 7, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/19/2017 10:18:00 AM
Deep haiku with a strong last line, Sunshine:)
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Date: 5/19/2017 12:46:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/17/2017 1:25:00 AM
Powerful write, Anne-Lise. Another great Haiku. Regards, John.
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Date: 5/17/2017 6:13:00 AM
- Thank you very much, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/16/2017 5:23:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, well i am back and here i am on another excellent Haiku. You always have such wonderful thoughts. In this form your thoughts take wing and sing so gently. I am glad i have never walked alone for my God has always walked with me. I walk the way set for me. Your work always sings to the soul Anne-Lise. Well, you know me and excellent Haiku. It has to be a seven and a fave. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 5/17/2017 6:16:00 AM
- Thanks for always appreciating my Haikus, Mike :) - It's a pleasure to receive a 7 and a fav. from you my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/15/2017 1:21:00 AM
Extraordinary my friend, Anne-Lise. Deep thought.A 7+ . I have to stay away for a little while my friend. Be back later. Thank you so much!
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Date: 5/17/2017 6:17:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/14/2017 8:32:00 PM
Dear Anne-Lise, you are certainly leaving deep footprints on this earth. Bonne fête des mères:) Amitiés
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Date: 5/17/2017 6:18:00 AM
- Anne-Marie, thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/14/2017 5:54:00 PM
what an incredible 'ku from start to end...your print on earth is well marked, anne.. happy mother's day and huggs
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Date: 5/17/2017 6:18:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/14/2017 5:04:00 PM
I enjoyed this one with the picture of the one footprint.
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Date: 5/17/2017 6:19:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/14/2017 5:57:00 AM
Good Morning Anne. The Haiku is in perfect form voice and tone. This is excellent work entirely. To those of you who write in this style I bow. Have a wonderful morning and day.
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Date: 5/14/2017 8:11:00 AM
- I've always admired Haikus poems ... a great form ... that says a lot .... easier to learn than Limerick, Lisa :))) - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/13/2017 10:45:00 PM
Lonely, but going where they want to go:) Great haiku, Anne Lise.
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Date: 5/14/2017 8:03:00 AM
- Lonely does not always mean sad, some enjoy their own company :) - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Daniel :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/13/2017 9:19:00 PM
Oh why do I love this so. It felt like so real to me. Great job Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/14/2017 8:00:00 AM
- Happy this "hit your heart", Akkina :) - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/13/2017 8:10:00 PM
A gift blessed everyday. ~*
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Date: 5/14/2017 7:58:00 AM
- Thanks, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/13/2017 8:06:00 PM
It reminds me of the story 'footprints in the sand' , I think would apply quite aptly. Brilliant Anne-Lise. ...Maria 7+
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Date: 5/14/2017 7:57:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit a 7 and lovely comments, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/13/2017 7:33:00 PM
I love your philosophy AnneLise:) this is a beautiful spiritual gem. a definite fave. blessings xxx
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Date: 5/14/2017 7:56:00 AM
- Many thanks for your always enjoyable visit, Lynn - A special thank you for yours "fav." - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/13/2017 5:28:00 PM
Anne-Lise...reminds me of Neruda I am reading translations of....we exist & have memories...but. travel alone, lucky when we find love to share
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Date: 5/14/2017 7:55:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, James - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/13/2017 5:19:00 PM
Very philosophical my dear friend. Beautifully penned. A 7. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/14/2017 3:39:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit a 7 and lovely comments, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/13/2017 5:11:00 PM
Only one set of footprints. It is lonely but well done, Anne-Lise and with so few words! <3
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Date: 5/14/2017 3:30:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and comments, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/13/2017 4:37:00 PM
Hi Anne -Lise , one set of footprints is lonely for sure , lovely write had me thinking ps I got a new face lol :))))hugs
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Date: 5/13/2017 4:40:00 PM
- A smile face :))) - Many thanks for your visit and comments, Niall - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/13/2017 4:06:00 PM
With this lovely poem you take my thoughts elsewhere...where the 'lonely' is not as lonely as s/he appears! That one set of footprints is open to an uplifting interpretation. #7 Hugs // paul
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Date: 5/14/2017 3:36:00 AM
- Always exciting with the first commens, Paul :) - (Especially in a haiku poem) - Thanks for meaningful comments a 7 and your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)