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A haven full of stars Frozen ground is covered with snow The winter has arrived Freezing snow crystals fall softly down on my nose Why do they melt 02.12.2012 A-L Andresen :: * 03.12.2012 - I have re- write this haiku to "Winter" - not for the contest!

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Don Munro

Date: 12/13/2012 11:25:00 AM

oh, how perfectly still i feel after reading this. Lovely!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/14/2012 6:29:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Don. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jancarl Campi

Date: 12/5/2012 9:36:00 AM

What a lovely haiku. It may be "Winter," But this haiku somehow warmed me. Take care, Jancarl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/5/2012 10:03:00 AM

Thank you for your warm words - happy to see you Jancarl. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 12/5/2012 6:27:00 AM

This is a very lovely and fascinating haiku I enjoyed reading from you my dear friend and favorite poet, Annde-Lise. Two thumbs up for this wonderful gem! It reminds me of a beautiful season which is now here but I wish we have snow in our place. Thank you so much for sharing and your very inspiring comment on my latest poem. Advance Merry Christmas! love always, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/5/2012 6:30:00 AM

It is not for the contest Leonora - I hope to see you again before Christmas. - Thank you for your words - happy to see you . :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

James Tate

Date: 12/5/2012 6:14:00 AM

Anne, this is very nice reading on your haiku x2. I suggest you drop the "s" on FALLS in this part following the plural in crystals: Freezing snow crystals falls softly down on my nose Thanks for your comments on my Light entry win

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/5/2012 6:20:00 AM

Ok. - Thank you James ! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/5/2012 6:17:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you James. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/5/2012 5:18:00 AM

Amazing. A heartfelt write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/5/2012 5:53:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Ravi. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 12/5/2012 4:51:00 AM

Anne I loved this winter write. It's a realism of winter's cold. Warm smiles, Connie

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/5/2012 5:53:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Connie. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 12/5/2012 3:58:00 AM

Angother beauty from you, enjoyed!! Ja

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/5/2012 5:52:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Jag. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 12/5/2012 2:21:00 AM

what a heartfelt write Anne Lise..thank you for sharing your beautiful tribute...<3<3<3 SK

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/5/2012 2:40:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Sukmawati. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 12/4/2012 9:58:00 PM

Nice Haiku. They melt because your body is warm, but it's nice to see them fall. Thanks for sharing. Good night. Lucilla

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/5/2012 1:47:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Lucilla. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Holly Moore

Date: 12/4/2012 7:43:00 PM

This is very beautiful..thank you for commenting on my page! xxoo Holly

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/5/2012 1:47:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Holly. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/4/2012 5:44:00 PM

Anne, watch out for the haiku police...LOL...love this.....thank you for sharing..always~LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/5/2012 1:46:00 AM

....lol.. :) Thank you for your words - happy to see you Linda. :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2012 1:46:00 PM

oh, you have got yourself a questionku with that second one!!! COOL.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/4/2012 1:49:00 PM

NOT APPROVED,Andrea. :=) Thank you for your words - happy to see you . :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 12/4/2012 8:10:00 AM

Anne-Lise, lovely winter haikus, we had snow here in Canada recently, just like you describe. Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/4/2012 10:11:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Consrance :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kathryn Collins

Date: 12/4/2012 7:53:00 AM

The stars are so clear. Wonderful haiku Anne Lise. love, Kathy

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/4/2012 10:11:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Kathryn :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/3/2012 6:13:00 PM

You still owe me a Questionku, looking forward to see what you come up with. Have a nice evening.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/4/2012 2:10:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Richard :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/3/2012 3:19:00 PM

oh to be in Norway,,, love these...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/3/2012 3:22:00 PM

WELKOMMEN TO SNOW AND MINUS DEGREES,HARRY!! Thank you for your words - happy to see you :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Horne

Date: 12/3/2012 3:14:00 PM

really love haiku, Anne-Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/3/2012 3:17:00 PM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Jack :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/3/2012 10:43:00 AM

Melting is how snowflakes die.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/3/2012 10:45:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you John :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/3/2012 7:22:00 AM

LOL because your nose is hot like rudolph?? [a freezing snow crystal/falls softly down my nose -- Dad's Hanky] so nice to read your work to start the day..Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/3/2012 10:10:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Debbie:)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/3/2012 5:45:00 AM

Great one..If for a contest, will be a winner...Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/3/2012 6:10:00 AM

Thank you for your words - happy to see you Sara :)!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/2/2012 8:29:00 PM

Brilliant, a simply brilliant write m friend! I really enjoyed reading it this evening, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/3/2012 1:38:00 AM