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- Grey Shadows Never Dies -

The black side of a life betrayal and choked dreams 
Cries of pain that are locked into their souls 

Evil twistfate deals aches and screams 
Inside darkened dungeons filled with peril and woe 

In the trap, feels like stuck in of eternity madness 
Hands are not chained but mind is unclear 

Hidden away from the world today within darkness crying 
Nightmares of life's perils strike deep irons hotly burns 

Blowing with the wind, flying a hurricane 
Shamelessly all trying to live from day to day 

Frozen ice frosting bites cold deeds creeps inside scars 
Slowly from the scrapyard of life's twisted metal crushed 

They cried many tear, tears of hope - wanted life to last 
But life was not fair enough as the remains lay deeply covered 

Unraveling out savagery of an animal cold cutting steel beast cursed 
Piercing howls forgiving the past in order to be redeemed blessed 





 A co write written by Liam Mcdaid and
 Anne-Lise Andresen :) - 20.01.2015 - 

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Cherl Dunn Date: 1/23/2015 11:22:00 AM What a contrast to what I have read from you in the past my friend, but I enjoyed it alot, it's a haunting poem of an errie flavoring of spooky intensions it gave me cold chills very cool by the way. I think us as human beings like the rush of being scared sometimes, and this did it for me, cheri Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/23/2015 11:52:00 AM - Life goes up .... and down .... - Cherl, thank you for visiting and great comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton Date: 1/23/2015 9:17:00 AM wow powerful deep and dark poem fantastic pen by both of you hugs 7 Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/23/2015 11:53:00 AM - Shadoe, thank you for visiting, 7 and great comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 1/22/2015 3:46:00 PM Great collab Anne....best wishes....hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/23/2015 2:51:00 AM - Joseph, thank you for visiting and great comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/22/2015 9:37:00 AM You and Liam have done an amazing job! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/22/2015 11:54:00 AM - Thank you for visiting and great comments, Richard :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus Date: 1/21/2015 3:39:00 PM Fate can be harsh and cruel, and yet hope is the last thing to die. You two have performed well in unison; #7 Well done Anne Lise & Liam! // paul Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/22/2015 3:00:00 AM - Thank you for visiting and great comments, Paul :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 1/21/2015 1:06:00 PM A fantastic collab...you two write very well together! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2015 1:18:00 PM - Thank you for the beautiful words, Rhonda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hina Nasir Date: 1/21/2015 11:50:00 AM THIS is so touching ... struggling life and darkness that beholds us , loved its sentiment Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2015 12:42:00 PM - Thank you for visiting and great comments, Hina :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath Date: 1/21/2015 9:16:00 AM a great fighting between inner consciousness and practical happenings. Here, with strong inner strength all obstacles must be made to an ant being as an elephant. Never feel upset go ahead with true spirit, it may take time but victory is sure if with God always. Loved your great poem of vision much, my lovely friend,bl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2015 12:38:00 PM - A fight, a big fight my friend Bl - Thank you for visiting and great comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 1/21/2015 8:08:00 AM Hands are not chained but mind is unclear -----self-induced slavery, our existence. Anne-Lise /Liam Love>RAJAT Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2015 8:44:00 AM - A sense of failure, find no solution ... - Rajat, thank you for visiting and lovely comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/21/2015 5:30:00 AM Dear Anne-Lise and Liam, Liam and Anne-Lise, I see your poetic love affair has bloomed to an astonishing level! Marvelously done! A seven to each! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2015 12:33:00 PM - Dear friend Demetrios, I understood what you meant - (but maybe others did not understand) - If anyone would think otherwise ...... it would not BE YOU !!!!! Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/21/2015 9:30:00 AM "My dear the expression refers " To the realm of poetry that bounds your souls, it doesn't refer to any carnal affair! Sorry you took it the wrong way! I am the last person on earth that would think otherwise!" Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2015 8:24:00 AM - "Poetic love affair" ...... but it is not a secret :))) - my husband read what we write :))) - Thank you for visiting, a 7 and lovely comments, dear Demetrios - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 1/20/2015 10:37:00 PM Hi Liam & Anne-Lise! This is a very powerful collaboration between the two of you! Wow! Very deep and intense pens here my dearest friends Liam and Anne-Lise! Very sad but great written stuff right from the very heart and soul.A 7 +++ For each of you! As always you two have golden pens!.smiling.I wish you both a very lovely day! God bless you and all His angels from heaven protect you against any evil! :) Love and hugs! xxoxxoxxoxxx D. ^O^ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2015 3:29:00 AM - Dorian a big thank you from both Liam and me! - Always nice with feedback on what we write! - I wish you a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll Date: 1/20/2015 6:15:00 PM Good collaboration between you an old friend Liam! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2015 3:22:00 AM - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Ken - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

David Meade Date: 1/20/2015 5:16:00 PM Another powerful piece . . . . an awesome finish with a big wise ending! Lovely dear friends. 7 Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2015 3:22:00 AM - Thanks for visiting, lovely comments and a 7, David :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison Date: 1/20/2015 5:10:00 PM deep dark imagery Anne Lise and Liam - I found this so so chilling - awesome write my friends - a 7 hugs Jan xxx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2015 3:20:00 AM - Jan, thanks for visiting, 7 and lovely comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid Date: 1/20/2015 5:06:00 PM have to say your words really blew this anne lise golden a great pleasure writing this piece with you pal also thank you both for the smiling beautiful comments deeply appreciates Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2015 3:18:00 AM - A poem that came "blowing with the wind" - A pleasure to write with you, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith Date: 1/20/2015 3:32:00 PM A beautiful piece you two...hugs Tim Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2015 3:12:00 AM - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Tim - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shane Cooper Date: 1/20/2015 3:17:00 PM I am in awe of the imagery it creates such a dark mood "of eternity madness", "choked dreams" words conveying dispair and such loss. it is a brilliant write. into my favourites. love Shane xxx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2015 3:11:00 AM - Shane, thanks for visiting,"fav" and lovely comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)