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14.07.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- NO 1229 - Poetry Contest -
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

2nd place in the contest

OOOO OOOOOOOO O Friday the 13thO a sign of misfortune Don't have 13 guests O around the table,O O all 13 die within O OOOOOO a year OO OO Break a mirror, seven years of misfortune I OOOOOO Black cat across the road, I Never walk OO OOO - spit three times I OO under a ladder... to undo this calamity I O avoid the OOO OOOOO X / triangle ...witchcraft - X Cross your fingers I just to be safe OOO I OOOOOO OLook for OO I a four-leaf clover I I in the meadow, OO I I OO it brings you OO I I OO Good Luck O I I * OOOOOO I I * * OOOO I I * * I I * * II ***

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/19/2023 11:14:00 AM

Truly inspired, Anne-Lise! I delighted in your creativity unleashed! Love the way each leaf represented a different superstition. Congratulations on your win! Hugs and blessings!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2023 3:06:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Sam :) - hugs

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/17/2023 11:46:00 AM

Love your creative style on this 4 leaf clover. awesome my friend. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2023 3:06:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Phyllis :) - hugs

Lonna Blodgett

Date: 7/16/2023 5:51:00 PM

So Fun!! Highly creative. Congrats, Lonna

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2023 3:06:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Lonna :) - hugs

Jack Horne

Date: 7/15/2023 6:37:00 AM

amazing - so clever how you did this

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2023 3:05:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Jack :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/15/2023 6:20:00 AM

How adorable! There is love and luck in every leaf. Congrats on such a wonderfully presented marvelous poem Anne-Lise.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/15/2023 1:05:00 AM

WOW you are truly an expert at these amazing shape poems Anne-Lise! hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2023 3:21:00 AM

- I'm sure anyone could do this...but, it takes time...many thanks for your lovely comment, Jan :) - hugs

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/14/2023 7:41:00 PM

Fabulousness! xomo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2023 3:16:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Maureen :) - hugs

Kelly Deschler

Date: 7/14/2023 5:18:00 PM

I have looked for four leaf clovers and never been lucky enough to find one ... How nice it was to have stumbled upon one here in this great write ... Very nicely done :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2023 2:57:00 AM

- I have found four-leaf clovers many times, Kelly ... but, it has not brought me happiness ... old superstition ... but fun to think about ... many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

The Situation

Date: 7/14/2023 4:49:00 PM

Very creative. Loved the reminder

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2023 2:58:00 AM

- Thank you very much, T.S. :) - hugs

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/14/2023 1:50:00 PM

anne-lise - you are the queen of concrete poems (which is what they were called when i taught)! this one, like all the others, is a gem...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2023 2:59:00 AM

- My first time as "queen" :))) ... thank you very much, Ilene :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/14/2023 1:34:00 PM

Very creative work in this one. You have become very good with these. Way to go. If for a contest, it reads like a great contender to me. Thanks for sharing the four-leafed clove with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2023 3:01:00 AM

- You have many beautiful shape poems too, Sara... many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 7/14/2023 1:27:00 PM

Amazingly done Anne-Lise! I am so impressed with your artful poetic skill, the messages in each leaf reminded me of my mother's panic on almost each one, especially the mirror breaking. Walking under a ladder in astore as a child, she actually pretty well shrieked, (happily not too loudly), and made us walk back under it backwards, she said maybe that would help. I figured the bad luck may be if a can of paint would fall on our heads?!! Anyway, this was so much fun. Great job! <3

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2023 3:04:00 AM

- I don't believe these claims ... but many do ... many thanks for your lovely comment, BJ :) - hugs

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/14/2023 11:30:00 AM

Wow! Anne-lise this shape poem is fantastic! So creative to go with the theme of superstitions. Blessings, Kim M

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2023 3:07:00 AM

- Fun to make ... fun to share ... hope the four-leaf clover brings you good luck, Kim... many thanks for your words :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/14/2023 11:25:00 AM

Very creative poem, Anne-Lise. Much enjoyed the shape and its message.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2023 3:08:00 AM

- Glad you enjoy it... many thanks for your lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 7/14/2023 11:10:00 AM

How come all these superstitions are common in every culture? People must be thinking alike.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2023 3:10:00 AM

- People are the same ... regardless of culture, Jay :) - Thanks for visiting :) - hugs

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/14/2023 10:31:00 AM

:) Yes, we are a silly people at times. Brilliant writing! 13--the Christ and His 12 apostles, God with us.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2023 3:10:00 AM

- Joe, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Lin Lane

Date: 7/14/2023 10:27:00 AM

Anne-Lise, you have a wonderful imagination to go along with your poetic skill. This is wonderful.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2023 3:15:00 AM

- Time consuming... patience... creativity, but fun to make... nice you enjoyed it ... many thanks, Lin :) - hugs