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- Fight With Dragons and Wolves -

Take me into the realm of your midnight dreams awakening sleep 
Bring us to a higher level far away from misery and despair
Where waves through oceans are kissed by a salted breeze blowing 

A place where mind can fly upon strong waves, straight lines on white sheets
Trembling currents grasp one breathless moment holding time 
No one will not lead us, even if it blows up to storm force gale 

Circle of twilight's halo under magic spells cast breathing fire starbursts 
Stars living on self produced energy under horizon's steps forward 
A mirror reflection of a faraway kingdom reflecting of the sun 

Faced with light internally stored faithful mercy yields 
We call life a mystery unforgettable the words of faith, hope and love
Crowning angels you came before me a queen 

Defeating the dragons and fighting wolves from preying sacrifice 
We find a personal point of common ground held in between world's 
Viewing life as the canvas we paint upon our memories 










29.04.2017
(Unrhymed tercets)
A Collaborated Poem 
Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid
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Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 5/24/2017 8:23:00 PM Sunshine Smile I have enjoyed this poem.I felt like I was part of this poem. Yes and I also found it to be spiritualas well. Well done. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/25/2017 8:00:00 AM - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lynn Marie Date: 5/12/2017 1:03:00 AM A beautiful collaboration on the richness of life that is possible when all senses are enacted and present through every day life. When ones spirit is intune, is where true life and true love can be found and nurtured and your gorgeous poem is a celebration of the best of us. Wonderful, spiritual sentiments, fabulous writing Anne-Lise and Liam:) lynnxxx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/12/2017 3:12:00 AM - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, Lynn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 5/10/2017 1:59:00 PM Beautiful collab poem, Anne-Lise and Liam. Very spiritual and intelligently written. Well crafted poetry on display. A 7! Lots of love and hugs. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/10/2017 2:02:00 PM - Glad you like it, Freddie :) - Thank you very much, especially for a 7 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne Date: 5/1/2017 4:43:00 PM A great collaboration. Congratulations to you both, a fav with lots of love, armand. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/3/2017 3:27:00 AM - Nice to see you, Armand .... thanks for the great feedback on Liams and my poem - Special thanks for a 7 and fav. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman Date: 5/1/2017 3:58:00 PM Anne-Lise and Liam, Congratulations on the POTD honor here!! Your combined efforts with the imagery, the metaphors, and the wondrous nature of the five stanzas here are marvelous. The very last verse of the poem, "Viewing life . . ." completes the picture perfectly. Superb!! SEVEN/FAVE!! Cheers and Best, Gary Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/3/2017 3:24:00 AM - Always a great honor with a seven + fav. Gary :) - Thank you for your congratulations and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Marie Coreggia Date: 5/1/2017 9:04:00 AM Congratulations on PotD for this incredible write which still breathes its fire into my mind:) Amitiés Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/3/2017 3:23:00 AM - Anne-Marie, thank you for your congratulations and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith Date: 5/1/2017 12:12:00 AM Congratulations on a great collaboration and POTD honors, well done... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/3/2017 3:22:00 AM - Thank you for your congratulations and lovely comments, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet Date: 4/30/2017 1:25:00 PM Your collaboration with Liam, kindled my imagination and stirred my heart. A very moving and heart felt poem, thought provoking, and yet gentle. Emile. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/3/2017 3:20:00 AM - Glad you like it, Emile :) - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid Date: 4/30/2017 10:51:00 AM anne lise congratulations on poem of the day your pen gave it the golden glow of fire smiling i pray you have a blessed day pal Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/3/2017 3:18:00 AM - There are two "p.o.t.d." today .... this fell completely away .... it's not our poem that appears when you enter this page ... sad - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/30/2017 9:39:00 AM Wow to both of you! What an epic write! 7! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/3/2017 3:14:00 AM - Thank you very much, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jerry T Curtis Date: 4/30/2017 5:51:00 AM A Very thought provoking piece, enjoyed reading it --- you two work well together Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/3/2017 3:13:00 AM - Thank you very much, Jerry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams Date: 4/30/2017 4:41:00 AM Impressive and Outstanding Anne-Lise. A very strong collaboration between you and Liam . Loved it. A 7++ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/3/2017 3:12:00 AM - Glad you like it, my friend Maria :) - Thank you very much, especially for a 7 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter Date: 4/29/2017 6:47:00 PM Thank you two for taking me away for a few imaginary moments. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/3/2017 3:11:00 AM - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid Date: 4/29/2017 5:51:00 PM always a pleasure joining pen with you anne lise your ink shone golden through passing you a warm smile thank you pal i pray your weekend is blessed beautiful Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/3/2017 3:11:00 AM - Thank you, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper Date: 4/29/2017 4:25:00 PM A wonderful collaboration, Sunshine, love the theme ~* Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/3/2017 3:08:00 AM - A pleasure with your visit, Eve :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/29/2017 1:35:00 PM such a powerful write brimming with imagery from the both of you, anne... lovely theme.. happy huggss Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/29/2017 1:40:00 PM - Thank you very much, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 4/29/2017 1:14:00 PM Your collaboration with Liam dear, Anne-Lise, always produces brilliant results and this is not an exemption! A 7 to each of you! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/29/2017 1:22:00 PM - Glad you like it, my friend :) - Thank you very much, especially for a 7 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)