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Viking Swords at Stavanger Sword Monument, Stavanger, Norway:

Viking Swords - Stavanger, Norway

Take me into the realm of your midnight dreams awakening sleep Bring us to a higher level far away from misery and despair Where waves through oceans are kissed by a salted breeze blowing A place where mind can fly upon strong waves, straight lines on white sheets Trembling currents grasp one breathless moment holding time No one will not lead us, even if it blows up to storm force gale Circle of twilight's halo under magic spells cast breathing fire starbursts Stars living on self produced energy under horizon's steps forward A mirror reflection of a faraway kingdom reflecting of the sun Faced with light internally stored faithful mercy yields We call life a mystery unforgettable the words of faith, hope and love Crowning angels you came before me a queen Defeating the dragons and fighting wolves from preying sacrifice We find a personal point of common ground held in between world's Viewing life as the canvas we paint upon our memories 29.04.2017 (Unrhymed tercets) A Collaborated Poem Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 5/24/2017 8:23:00 PM
Sunshine Smile I have enjoyed this poem.I felt like I was part of this poem. Yes and I also found it to be spiritualas well. Well done.
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Date: 5/25/2017 8:00:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/12/2017 1:03:00 AM
A beautiful collaboration on the richness of life that is possible when all senses are enacted and present through every day life. When ones spirit is intune, is where true life and true love can be found and nurtured and your gorgeous poem is a celebration of the best of us. Wonderful, spiritual sentiments, fabulous writing Anne-Lise and Liam:) lynnxxx
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Date: 5/12/2017 3:12:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, Lynn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/10/2017 1:59:00 PM
Beautiful collab poem, Anne-Lise and Liam. Very spiritual and intelligently written. Well crafted poetry on display. A 7! Lots of love and hugs.
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Date: 5/10/2017 2:02:00 PM
- Glad you like it, Freddie :) - Thank you very much, especially for a 7 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/1/2017 4:43:00 PM
A great collaboration. Congratulations to you both, a fav with lots of love, armand.
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Date: 5/3/2017 3:27:00 AM
- Nice to see you, Armand .... thanks for the great feedback on Liams and my poem - Special thanks for a 7 and fav. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/1/2017 3:58:00 PM
Anne-Lise and Liam, Congratulations on the POTD honor here!! Your combined efforts with the imagery, the metaphors, and the wondrous nature of the five stanzas here are marvelous. The very last verse of the poem, "Viewing life . . ." completes the picture perfectly. Superb!! SEVEN/FAVE!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 5/3/2017 3:24:00 AM
- Always a great honor with a seven + fav. Gary :) - Thank you for your congratulations and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/1/2017 9:04:00 AM
Congratulations on PotD for this incredible write which still breathes its fire into my mind:) Amitiés
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Date: 5/3/2017 3:23:00 AM
- Anne-Marie, thank you for your congratulations and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/1/2017 12:12:00 AM
Congratulations on a great collaboration and POTD honors, well done...
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Date: 5/3/2017 3:22:00 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations and lovely comments, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/30/2017 1:25:00 PM
Your collaboration with Liam, kindled my imagination and stirred my heart. A very moving and heart felt poem, thought provoking, and yet gentle. Emile.
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Date: 5/3/2017 3:20:00 AM
- Glad you like it, Emile :) - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/30/2017 10:51:00 AM
anne lise congratulations on poem of the day your pen gave it the golden glow of fire smiling i pray you have a blessed day pal
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Date: 5/3/2017 3:18:00 AM
- There are two "p.o.t.d." today .... this fell completely away .... it's not our poem that appears when you enter this page ... sad - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/30/2017 9:39:00 AM
Wow to both of you! What an epic write! 7!
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Date: 5/3/2017 3:14:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/30/2017 5:51:00 AM
A Very thought provoking piece, enjoyed reading it --- you two work well together
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Date: 5/3/2017 3:13:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Jerry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/30/2017 4:41:00 AM
Impressive and Outstanding Anne-Lise. A very strong collaboration between you and Liam . Loved it. A 7++
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Date: 5/3/2017 3:12:00 AM
- Glad you like it, my friend Maria :) - Thank you very much, especially for a 7 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/29/2017 6:47:00 PM
Thank you two for taking me away for a few imaginary moments.
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Date: 5/3/2017 3:11:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/29/2017 5:51:00 PM
always a pleasure joining pen with you anne lise your ink shone golden through passing you a warm smile thank you pal i pray your weekend is blessed beautiful
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Date: 5/3/2017 3:11:00 AM
- Thank you, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/29/2017 4:59:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, beautiful free verse , I can almost taste the salt air and hope , love:)))hugs ,,rate 7
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Date: 5/3/2017 3:09:00 AM
- A pleasure with your visit, Niall :) - Thank you very much for a 7 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/29/2017 4:25:00 PM
A wonderful collaboration, Sunshine, love the theme ~*
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Date: 5/3/2017 3:08:00 AM
- A pleasure with your visit, Eve :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/29/2017 1:35:00 PM
such a powerful write brimming with imagery from the both of you, anne... lovely theme.. happy huggss
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Date: 4/29/2017 1:40:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/29/2017 1:14:00 PM
Your collaboration with Liam dear, Anne-Lise, always produces brilliant results and this is not an exemption! A 7 to each of you!
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Date: 4/29/2017 1:22:00 PM
- Glad you like it, my friend :) - Thank you very much, especially for a 7 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)