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21.06.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen

- F Words - Poetry Contest -
Sponsored by: Constance La France

1st place in the contest

Being present in the moment When the wind blows from a cloud the trees whisper in the gentle breeze A blush of poppies as a kiss from wine-red lips Multiple endless paths to walk between shadowy arches of velvet moss A gesticulating cuckoo placed at the top of the trees Poor bird that has no nest of its own Wish for something ... maybe your wish will come true

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Valsa George

Date: 6/26/2023 4:46:00 AM

Beautiful poem and a lovely image. Altogerher fantabulous ! Congratulations on your first place win, dear Anne. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/24/2023 9:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write/picture. I love this one. Hugs... Have a blessed day/weekend writing away..................

Paul Callus

Date: 6/24/2023 9:05:00 AM

Back with congratulations, Anne-Lise! My neck aches from trying to see you on the top of the podium :) Smiles & Hugs // paul

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/23/2023 9:27:00 PM

Very beautiful scenic narration. Congratulations!

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/23/2023 7:28:00 PM

Back with heartfelt congratulations on your podium contest win with this lovely poem. Blessings

Speaks Volumes

Date: 6/23/2023 5:07:00 PM

I wished your poem would win, and my wish came true. Such a splendid lilting poem, bringing images of delight yet envy. So well done Anne Lise.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/23/2023 4:42:00 AM

ah, a cryptic mystical write with great assimilation and valor Anne, your beauty is unbreakable, so is the bird you speak of, he makes any branch his home, and he is strong, so are you xo

Frederic Parker

Date: 6/22/2023 11:14:00 AM

To be present in the moment with wine-red lips can cause even the poppies to blush...really nice poetry dear poet...good luck

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/22/2023 8:27:00 AM

I really like the metaphors you made with your words, Anne-Lise, and I think your poem ended so well. It seems like the cuckoo bird wishes it could make its own special nests like the other birds do. Good luck with the contest

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/22/2023 6:42:00 AM

Beautiful poetry, Anne-Lise. Much enjoyed the imagery you convey.

Joe Dimino

Date: 6/22/2023 3:23:00 AM

Enchanting writing! Your words breathe, are alive with poetic sound and vision. Wonderful creation. Thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/22/2023 6:14:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Joe :) - hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 6/21/2023 12:54:00 PM

fantabulous indeed i especially love the blush of poppies stanza the imagery is a joy to read sweet Anne-Lise xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/21/2023 1:03:00 PM

- A blush of poppies in a green forest is a beautiful sight, Jan :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Ilene Bauer

Date: 6/21/2023 11:46:00 AM

A fantabulous poem, Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/21/2023 12:05:00 PM

- Many thanks for your comment, Ilene :) - hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 6/21/2023 11:45:00 AM

Fabulous lines in poem. Cuckoo does not raise its chicks; the male ones sing well.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/21/2023 12:05:00 PM

- A bad mother ... lays eggs in someone else's nest - Many thanks for your comment, Jay :) - hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 6/21/2023 11:31:00 AM

I love you fantabulous imagery, Anne-Lise, and I like how your poem ends. Probably that cuckoo wishes it could built original nests like other birds do :) Regards & Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/21/2023 11:34:00 AM

- Under the cuckoo you can make three wishes, Paul - as the old saying goes :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/21/2023 9:52:00 AM

A cuckoo always steals the nests of others. An ingenious poem with plenty of imagery. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/21/2023 10:52:00 AM

- A lazy bird, Victor :))) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs