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An illusion buzzed in my head the weather gods again twisted the heat had real made its mark this afternoon the air felt oppressive and everything around me vibrated I closed my eyes and moisturized my lips A bubbling wonderful feeling on my tongue with flavors of freshly picked strawberries Everything I wanted was a large dish with strawberries ice cream 08.07.2022 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 7/29/2022 10:20:00 AM
Your "Everything I wanted" is a sweet write/picture. Your dish sure looks great to me. Let's eat. Have a blessed/sweet day writing away.................
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Date: 7/22/2022 3:08:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, I am with you and Harry on this one. It would definitely go down well. Now you know I have to head for the kitchen and get myself some raspberry ripple, ice cream. I have no self control. Good luck in the contest. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX
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Date: 7/18/2022 6:44:00 AM
Made me want to join you Anne-Lise, love the poem.
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Date: 7/14/2022 3:57:00 AM
On a hot day even an illusory cup of ice cream can wet our lips and give us a kick ! Lovely penning , Anne !
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Date: 7/13/2022 3:19:00 PM
just grew some strawberries myself and had them with cream the other day, always lovely to read your posts I pray you have a wonderful week
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Date: 7/13/2022 12:36:00 PM
It looks wonderful to bad allergic to ice cream unless I make it myself but strawberries will do. Now I want dessert. lol love phyl
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Date: 7/10/2022 12:15:00 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, that so good. tonight I am having mango sherbet. Hugs Darlene
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Date: 7/10/2022 3:10:00 AM
Love it. A sure winner. Such a delight - God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 7/8/2022 1:06:00 PM
Delightful a treat your poem is, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 7/8/2022 1:01:00 PM
I wish I had one, it was a 104 degree feels like temp today
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Date: 7/8/2022 12:41:00 PM
Oh, my goodness, Anne-Lise, I'm seriously wishing I had strawberry ice cream in my freezer! Fantastic entry!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/8/2022 12:57:00 PM
- me too ... but, the freezer is empty :) - Many thanks for your lovely comments, Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/8/2022 12:16:00 PM
Beautiful Anne-Lise. When the temperatures start to soar, the best remedy for the heat is ice cream.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/8/2022 12:34:00 PM
- I have not tasted ice cream this summer ... it is not so hot ... 13 degrees and rain - Always nice to "see" you, Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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