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"i carry your heart with me(i carry it in my heart)i am never without it(anywhere i go you go . . . " ee Cummings I carry your memories like a piece of jewelry around my neck Worth more than diamonds, cannot be priced Thoughts never give me peace I lose the grip, because grief has no time limit The dark sunglasses do not dim the sunshine ~ but hides my red and teary eyes Your vicinity made everything complete ~ to me, you were my whole world The storm suddenly grabs hold of me Sleep refus to touch my eyes calmly Days without you, a process in various stages and the future is an unwritten chapter ~ Gone ~ but never forgotten ~ even in the bottomless darkness 06/11/2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Writing Challenge, November Some Kind of Love - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode 1st place in the contest

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/27/2019 8:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Great write & picture. I have been away. My brother just died & I just got back home. Your write is so true. Thank You..........

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/28/2019 4:27:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 11/19/2019 9:50:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your winning placement:-) hugs eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/20/2019 7:11:00 AM

- Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Beata Agustin

Date: 11/19/2019 8:17:00 AM

Wow! Congrats!! God bless you.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/20/2019 7:11:00 AM

- Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Beata :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Na Na

Date: 11/19/2019 1:42:00 AM

Congrats Anne-Lise u did a great job

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/20/2019 7:10:00 AM

- Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Greg :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Chiri

Date: 11/18/2019 9:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your win!;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/20/2019 7:10:00 AM

- Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Brenda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/18/2019 6:56:00 PM

Congratulations for your win Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/20/2019 7:09:00 AM

- Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 11/18/2019 4:19:00 PM

Anne-Lise congratulations on your top win in my writing challenge with this beautifully sad poem, I loved the image you included with your poem !

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/20/2019 7:12:00 AM

- Many thanks for my win in your contest, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 11/18/2019 3:48:00 PM

Congratulations Anne-Lise on your podium placement with your emotional poem! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/20/2019 7:09:00 AM

- Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Gondolf

Date: 11/18/2019 2:17:00 PM

Congrats on your first place win for this emotive verse, Anne-Lise. Hugs, John

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/20/2019 7:08:00 AM

- Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, John:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/18/2019 2:03:00 PM

such an emotional piece, so glad its fictional Anne-Lise, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/20/2019 7:08:00 AM

- Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 11/15/2019 4:46:00 AM

That is a beautiful adaptation. Bottomless darkness, memories and hope. Thank you, Kai

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2019 1:23:00 PM

- Many thanks for your kind visit and your comment, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/8/2019 10:22:00 AM

Hi Sunshine Smile - what a lovely quote by E E Cummings - we do though, we carry a loved ones heart and in fact wear it on our sleeve for all to see - grief is a process in various stages- a well written poem about a very sad situation. A certain win. Hugs and blessings Jenny.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/8/2019 11:54:00 AM

- Many thanks for visit and the lovely comments, dear Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/7/2019 8:22:00 AM

A necklace of verses more valuable than diamonds or pearls dearest, Anne-Lise! Good luck! Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/7/2019 11:39:00 AM

- Many thanks Demetrios, for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 11/6/2019 7:15:00 PM

Very deep and emotional write, Sunshine, good luck in the contest. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/7/2019 4:06:00 AM

- Many thanks Eve, for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ann Foster

Date: 11/6/2019 5:41:00 PM

I am so sad. This was too well written,(because) I hope it is not personal. Lovely indeed. Ann

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/7/2019 4:05:00 AM

- A fictional poem, Ann - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/6/2019 4:21:00 PM

i'm relieved to find out that this is fictional, anne-lise, but you'd never know it from the poem itself. it feels so real and so sad. best of luck in the contest...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/7/2019 4:04:00 AM

- Most of us have met the death Ilene, me as a nurse for many years have met it too many times - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 11/6/2019 4:09:00 PM

You have created a feeling of emptiness and sadness in this sorrowful poem my friend. The emotional content of this was deep and very strong. It would touch even the coldest heart. Best wishes in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/7/2019 4:01:00 AM

- A grief is hard to describe Chris, everyone feels different ... and some have the grief the rest of their lives - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/6/2019 1:52:00 PM

So well written, Anne-Lise..all the best.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/7/2019 3:57:00 AM

- Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/6/2019 1:21:00 PM

Poignant yet with such beautiful expression. Touching write my friend :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/6/2019 1:29:00 PM

- I felt a little sadness by writing this ... even though it's not reality, Sandra - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ts Poetry

Date: 11/6/2019 12:56:00 PM

Always alive in your heart

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/6/2019 1:24:00 PM

- A fictional poem, TS - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)