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12.02.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Dream flight on butterfly wings - through the sunflower garden - swoosh as brushstrokes across the sky, creates a fantasy orbit Leaves behind, blurry chaotic dust particles in space

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/22/2025 11:22:00 AM

As I read your second line, an “ooh,” escaped my lips. This sijo is a beauty!

Sally Eslinger

Date: 2/15/2025 5:30:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise! When i could still walk, every day after work, j’d go out back to sit on our deck to commune with God/nature, I would lose self/ego into the the flights of butterflies (which i too write about, so amazing as it is to do!). PThis wonderful descriptive poem is Truth to Nature. Fine, fine penning. Love you Anne-Lise!

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/14/2025 10:16:00 AM

Anne-Lise, a wonderful description of the happenings in nature we can enjoy. We should all imagine we can fly this way. It's a pleasant experience! Smiles!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/14/2025 8:55:00 AM

I like this one. Every time a butterfly's wing flutters it effects the weather on the other side of the earth. If this one is for a contest, it reads like a good contender tome. I think I have seen several of these so maybe a contest is going on. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2025 5:01:00 PM

Great sijo, Anne-Lise with cute picture.

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/13/2025 2:27:00 PM

This is certainly fancifully descriptive writing. I agree with all of the previous comments.

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/13/2025 12:56:00 PM

Loved your poem with stunning imagery and your great picture Anne-Lise. Warmest hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/13/2025 10:52:00 AM

Apart from the lovely picture, your poem is pure dazzling imagery. Well done.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/13/2025 9:09:00 AM

Lovely picture and words. Making me wish for spring and butterflies. love phyl

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/13/2025 7:38:00 AM

Dear Anne Lise, your words are a painting in motion. The idea of a dream flight on butterfly wings is so delicate, yet the way you describe it makes it feel like a force of nature. I loved how it's an experience meant to be felt rather than understood. Beautifully expressed! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/13/2025 7:53:00 AM