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- Dancing Notes For Love -

Kissing deep beats fluttering dancing on a breathless whisper A snowdrop falls on the lips melt slowly kiss you beautiful The whisper of your voice, the warmth of your kiss and touch If love is to be true not even a kiss can tear us apart Warmly held under the moon smiling beams brightly shining Love is not a game of the heart where the truth is preserved Loving an angel flying grace inside lit up one of a thousand stars In silence stars twinkle but in the distance we overhear the ocean plays its song Magical sprinkling all stardust trails confetti sparkles flashing I look into your eyes your heart and your soul like a ray of sunlight Silver reflections casting shadows out enchants winks spotlights a dream The stars would shower me with stardust of your smile Written by Liam Mcdaid & A-L Andresen 30.03.2015 Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 4/14/2015 1:44:00 PM
This is beautiful Anne-lise! Hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/14/2015 1:50:00 PM
- I love all the poems I have written with my friend Liam - They mean a lot to me - Really glad you enjoy this one Cecilia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/6/2015 7:36:00 AM
Imaginary rollercoaster! I like the explosive style. :D
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Date: 4/6/2015 8:49:00 AM
- Lotte, thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/5/2015 8:01:00 PM
Hello my very dear friend, Anne Lise! I'm so glad, it's national holiday here in bkk today (princess anniversary) and I can read poems. This is another very wonderful and precious collaboration of you with our dear friend, Liam. It's so beautifully romantic. I like it a lot and enjoyed the read. Thank you so much for sharing! Have a great week ahead! love lots and big hug, Leonora
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/6/2015 5:02:00 AM
- Really glad you enjoy Liam and my romantic poems dear Leonora :) - Easter almost over and daily life restarts, I wish you a great week :) - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/3/2015 9:49:00 PM
some very pretty images in this romantic poem, Anne Lise! oh, and I see it was Liam too!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/4/2015 12:07:00 PM
- Andrea, thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/1/2015 8:32:00 PM
Creates a nice image flow! I enjoyed...
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Date: 4/2/2015 5:44:00 AM
- Ronald, thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/1/2015 1:52:00 PM
This is truly beautiful Anne, A joy to read and great collab. Good work Kevin
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Date: 4/1/2015 2:21:00 PM
- Kevin, thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/1/2015 1:00:00 PM
I can't believe I haven't commented on this. I have already read this and yet...I love this beautiful collab, Anne. Sorry for being remiss. A 7. Enjoy the rest of the day, you two...Kim :)
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Date: 4/1/2015 2:23:00 PM
...... never too late, dear Kim :) - Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/1/2015 10:25:00 AM
Wonderful notes for dance filled with heartfelt love, nice collab. Both are genius. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 4/1/2015 2:20:00 PM
- Bl, thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/1/2015 8:31:00 AM
A touching write and beautiful collab! Happy Easter to both of you...hugs, Rhonda
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/1/2015 2:19:00 PM
- Rhonda, thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/1/2015 5:53:00 AM
Your pens were meant to dance as one. A brilliant colab!
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Date: 4/1/2015 8:00:00 AM
- M.Y.A. , thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/31/2015 8:58:00 PM
Beautiful romantic write Anne...hugs
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Date: 4/1/2015 7:59:00 AM
- Joseph, thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/31/2015 5:46:00 PM
A terrific piece....hugs Tim
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Date: 4/1/2015 7:59:00 AM
- Tim, thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/31/2015 2:15:00 PM
a magical, sweet expression of warmth, dear anne.. lovely collaboration.. have a nice day.. huggs!
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Date: 3/31/2015 2:25:00 PM
- Nette, thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/31/2015 2:14:00 AM
beautiful words
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Date: 3/31/2015 2:43:00 AM
- Shane, thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/31/2015 1:17:00 AM
As usual, your poems are always beautiful and well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 3/31/2015 2:42:00 AM
- My friend Ravi, thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/30/2015 8:10:00 PM
Hello Grandma from Norway!! Glad to read your beautiful words this morning, this is rich of imagination and so romantic, hehehe, miss you, skiss and hug from me and Ken
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Date: 3/31/2015 2:41:00 AM
- Dear Yanny,thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - Miss you to !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/30/2015 6:00:00 PM
Hello Liam n' Anne Lise !Another very beautiful and dazzling love poem penned by you my dearest friends.Just awesome! A 7+++ to each of you from me!A very romantic and passionate love poem to be held so very close to my heart.smiling.I enjoyed it!Truly mighty golden pens!!Have a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you always!:)Always in my prayers.Love n' hugs! xxoxoxo D.^O^
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Date: 3/31/2015 2:39:00 AM
- Dorian, thanks for the nice visit, 7 +++ and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/30/2015 4:21:00 PM
As always beautiful writing . Love it :) Thanks for dropping by.. Fatima
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Date: 3/31/2015 2:32:00 AM
- Fatima, thanks for visiting and comments - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/30/2015 4:03:00 PM
a grand write.enjoyed reading . 'stardust of your smile' has been haunting me! Mehnaz
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/30/2015 4:10:00 PM
- A smile of love, Mehnaz :) - Thanks for visiting and comments - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/30/2015 3:19:00 PM
Great Collaberation dear poet ! This write delves into the spirit of love X 2 ! Have a wonderful week Anna Lise......much love, james
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/30/2015 4:08:00 PM
- Yes, James: "spirit of love X 2" :) - Thanks for visiting and comments - hugs and <3 // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/30/2015 2:14:00 PM
simply magnificent - the words flow like liquid silk - a 7 from me Anne Lise and Liam - you two should continue this incredible partnership! :-) Hugs jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/30/2015 2:21:00 PM
- It's Liam who get my words to flow easily ...... a joy to work with him - Thanks for visiting, a 7 and comments, dear Jan ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/30/2015 12:46:00 PM
your starlight pen paints so very beautiful always a pleasure writing with you anne lise thank you so very much dear pal bless you always
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/30/2015 2:24:00 PM
- A pleasure to work with you :) - hugs and <3 // Anne-Lise :)

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