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Together we shall embrace heaven, the stars and the moon Even if ice drifts through our dreams Yesterday is gone ___ drowned in snow wet words Never forget the cheerful spring streams of childhood ~ glittering silver threads ~ The memories are life, the longing belongs to death The cross on the wall has been painted white Knowledge is a conscious understanding of "something" It does not have to be that difficult ________ our daily challenges ____ TOGETHER - A TOTAL UNIT a world in the colors of the rainbow 18/01/2021 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved "Unity" Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire 3rd place in the contest

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Date: 2/27/2021 7:40:00 AM
Congratulations Anne- Lise on a unique beautiful poem with colors and emotions.
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Date: 2/27/2021 7:43:00 AM
- Thank you very much for visit and congratulations, Frances :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/24/2021 1:44:00 PM
A universal consciousness. So true. It was lovely to meet you on this side of heaven Anne-Lise. Well done on your placement.
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Date: 1/26/2021 8:07:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your comment, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/23/2021 8:40:00 PM
Amen! I love it! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/26/2021 8:05:00 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Mark :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/23/2021 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Love your write, picture and butterfly. "Wonderful" Have a blessed day..................
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Date: 1/26/2021 8:04:00 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/22/2021 6:32:00 AM
Well written Anne-Lise. I enjoyed this. I hope you have a nice day :)
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Date: 2/15/2021 11:27:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/22/2021 4:59:00 AM
We do need to see the beauty of all races, Sunshine, and appreciate our "colorful" diversity. I hope we can reach that type of unity one day. Nicely penned! Congrats on your place in the contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 1/26/2021 8:06:00 AM
- Thank you very much for my place on your winning list, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/21/2021 2:40:00 PM
your pen sparkles in the arc of this beautifully painted piece
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Date: 1/26/2021 8:07:00 AM
- Liam, thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/21/2021 5:22:00 AM
The thought of a rainbow world! Beautiful!
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Date: 1/26/2021 8:06:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your comment, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/19/2021 2:13:00 PM
Well said Anne-Lise. Rainbows and butterflies, my two favorite things. Love this. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/20/2021 8:01:00 AM
- Judy, thank you very much for visiting and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/18/2021 9:36:00 PM
Yes one does sense a realm of unity..love this poem, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 1/20/2021 8:01:00 AM
- Thank you very much Harry, for visiting and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/18/2021 1:07:00 PM
A world of harmony and love painted in the colors of a rainbow! Wonderfully written dearest, Anne-Lise. Hugs xxx
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Date: 1/20/2021 8:00:00 AM
- Demrtrios, thank you very much for visiting and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/18/2021 12:54:00 PM
a lovely message Anne-Lise the ending is so uplifting and one of hope, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/20/2021 8:00:00 AM
- Thank you very much for visiting and your comment, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/18/2021 11:53:00 AM
What a lovely picture, a gif. Your poem speaks volumes. Would we find serenity. ~~
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Date: 1/20/2021 8:00:00 AM
- Thank you very much Victor, for visiting and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/18/2021 11:00:00 AM
There is so much on this beautiful world that unites us yet many don't share that vision that most of us have. We live in hope Anne, Have a great week. Tom
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Date: 1/20/2021 7:59:00 AM
- Thank you very much for visiting and your comment, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/18/2021 10:27:00 AM
It is indeed a colourful world, in that we are united. A lovely write and a gorgeous picture Anne-Lise... Belle
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Date: 1/20/2021 7:59:00 AM
- Belle, thank you very much for visiting and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/18/2021 9:22:00 AM
You are so right, Anne-Lise--it does not have to be that difficult. Great message of unity.
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Date: 1/20/2021 7:59:00 AM
- Thank you very much Vijay, for visiting and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/18/2021 7:59:00 AM
There is often a sense of unity without a word being spoken. Watching a rainbow, a fast moving stream that looks like silver threads. I really like your thoughts in these lines, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 1/20/2021 7:58:00 AM
- Thank you very much for visiting and your comment, Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/18/2021 7:41:00 AM
I love this. It's a glorious write worthy of a win. Best wishes for a win and Love to you. God bless you always
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Date: 1/20/2021 7:58:00 AM
- Thank you very much for visiting and your comment, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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