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Become this character for the next 12 minutes,  and WRITE A THOUGHTSHOT that would let readers know what caused you to react the way you did when the photo was taken.   **Common Core State Standards W3, L6 (character reflection, tone) Lesson link pinterest

- Chocolate -

Cute as an angel
Heavenly - Oh, gosh
One of a kind
Chubby hands, love the hair
Only one little bite
Lovely magical moments
Amazing pleasure
Tasty - but a little sticky
Enchanting chocolate face














17.09.2017
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)

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Date: 10/1/2017 8:27:00 PM
Yes, cute as an angel, a chocolaty one!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/2/2017 12:26:00 AM
- Thanks for the lovely comment, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/30/2017 9:03:00 AM
Good Morning Anne - It was the title that caught my eye. You give life and flair to chocolate and to the image you share. Well done with the format as well. Enjoy the weekend.
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Date: 9/30/2017 11:14:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comment, Lisa :) - Nice to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/26/2017 11:34:00 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile, i just finished reading your poetry. I enjoyed every poem you have written. This poem chocolate and I enjoyed reading this poem. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 9/26/2017 11:41:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit & lovely comment, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/23/2017 7:37:00 AM
Such a cute picture accompanying this lovely poem, Anne-Lise. I believe that at his age I had never tasted a chocolate, neither had most of my friends! Hugs // paul
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Date: 9/23/2017 3:00:00 PM
- We did not get chocolate as a child ... not my children either - Thanks for the lovely comments, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/21/2017 5:51:00 PM
Too cute! Just priceless Anne-Lise. thank you for the wonderful smiles xo
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Date: 9/22/2017 2:20:00 AM
- Many thanks Lynn, for your visit and your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/20/2017 10:50:00 AM
Children and chocolate! What a combination, Anne-Lise. I adore your acrostic as well as the photo. As you say, "Tasty - but a little sticky." Yummmy
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Date: 9/20/2017 11:58:00 AM
- Sticky but very cute, Carolyn :) - Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/19/2017 3:11:00 AM
Very sweet..
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Date: 9/19/2017 8:04:00 AM
- Thanks for the lovely comments, S. O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/18/2017 1:54:00 PM
I read the poem without the picture, then clicked to comment. Seeing the picture, it was a little worse than I thought. Nice write
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Date: 9/19/2017 3:09:00 AM
- Many thanks Michael, for your visit and your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/18/2017 1:48:00 PM
Reminds me of a little angel with a flute, Sunshine, enjoyed reading ~`*
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Date: 9/19/2017 3:08:00 AM
- Eve, many thanks for your visit and your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/18/2017 12:46:00 PM
First of all i say you i love children much and much more good funny children. They give life surely if one can enjoy with them. i gave a chocolate to a child he did the same thing. My fave piece. Beautifully captured the picture and drawn with sweet ditto words, my lovely dear friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 9/19/2017 3:08:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit a fave and your lovely comments, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/18/2017 7:01:00 AM
Cuteness personified!! Anne-Lise, you sure know how to put brightness in a person's day. Thank you...Maria
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Date: 9/19/2017 3:07:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comments, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/18/2017 6:24:00 AM
Ha ha, that's a cute and naughty boy indeed, Anne-lise:)
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Date: 9/19/2017 3:07:00 AM
- Many thanks Jo, for your visit and your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/17/2017 11:16:00 PM
By the way how did you find my photo? LOL
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Date: 9/18/2017 2:54:00 AM
- I found it in your mother's old photo album ... you were so sweet I could not resist, Arthur :) - Thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/17/2017 11:16:00 PM
Loved this!!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/18/2017 2:55:00 AM
- Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/17/2017 9:42:00 PM
From one chocolate freak to another...love this one! :) Pix is sooo cute! I'm sure most of us looked like that eating chocolate as kids! Now days I'm more reserved and love the dark stuff :) Thanks for writing and posting this cute piece...have great day and keep the smiles coming Sunshine :)
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Date: 9/18/2017 2:52:00 AM
- Sticky but very cute, Chris :) - Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/17/2017 7:45:00 PM
I love the picture. I love the poem. I love chocolate! A great write that made me smile Anne-Lise. Thank you!
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Date: 9/18/2017 2:49:00 AM
<3 <3 <3 ... :))) - Thanks for the lovely comments, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/17/2017 6:16:00 PM
Ahh!! The love of chocolate brings forth a praise..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 9/18/2017 2:48:00 AM
- Many thanks Sara, for your visit and your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/17/2017 3:39:00 PM
Great pic and penning too Anne-Lise, well done!
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Date: 9/18/2017 2:47:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comments, Gordon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/17/2017 3:26:00 PM
glad i'm not the one cleaning that child! very cute one, anne-lise!
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Date: 9/18/2017 2:47:00 AM
- A quick shower ... good as new, Ilene :) - Thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/17/2017 12:23:00 PM
How sweet this is, my dear...extremely sweet. :) Hope all is well, dear.
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Date: 9/17/2017 2:35:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comments, Eileen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/17/2017 9:18:00 AM
oh what a wonderful pic and charming poem and who could resist that impish face:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/17/2017 11:53:00 AM
- Who can resist chocolate, Jan :) - Thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/17/2017 7:45:00 AM
The poems sounds as happy as the little girl eating chocolate--well depicted as always, Anne-Lise!
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Date: 9/17/2017 8:04:00 AM
- Enchanting chocolate face ... make me smile, Vijay :) - Thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/17/2017 7:43:00 AM
I'd be willing to bet that's not the first 'little' bite. What an impish face! Well written, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 9/17/2017 7:56:00 AM
- You know, Lin ... chocolate ... one bit ... and you are "hooked" :))) - Thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/17/2017 7:41:00 AM
Too funny and cute
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/17/2017 8:02:00 AM
- Thanks for the lovely comments, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/17/2017 7:20:00 AM
This is such a perfect poem for that picture you placed here! I really loved reading your stunning poem this morning! Your choice of words were excellent in describing the child's situation! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/17/2017 7:57:00 AM
- Thanks for the lovely comments, Russell :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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