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- Beauty Is Looking Into Your Eyes and Seeing Your Heart

Twilight has it's own wings and its own melody Battles with the mystery of a sun setting horizon dawning hues Pearl white smile's from the moon, in a mood of beautiful seduction Oracle within one thousand chants dances with the shadows of night shades For you, I will catch every star that I see as the evening sky surrenders Sparkling silver dust their trails leave magic spells whispers deeply winds Drinking from the milky way a mix of delicious chocolate Icing of a thousand shape shifting patterns emerge glowing Soft caramel and gorgeous nougat smiles golden melting Under a canopy of stars you remain cradled forever beautiful I would love to dance like planets that circulate around the sun Blood's rivers are like red cherries and float like wine Its colorful aura exudes amazing happiness Sweet like a dream, I lean my cheek on lace pillows Everything feels so right, our love will grow strong A collaborated poem Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 11.01.2018 Copyright © All Rights Reserved * Poem of the Week ; 14.01.2018

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/31/2018 2:13:00 PM

- Love this poem ... many thanks, Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/16/2018 4:00:00 PM

:) filled me with romantic thoughts and feelings. Lovely piece, you two. Congrats on it being POTW.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 1/16/2018 9:37:00 AM

Gorgeous penning you too! xomo x2 :)

Donna Loughman

Date: 1/16/2018 9:03:00 AM

Congratulations on POTW! This is a beautiful poem by Anne-Lise and you! Well done & Well deserved:-)

John Beam

Date: 1/16/2018 8:40:00 AM

Great write Liam.

Probir Gupta

Date: 1/16/2018 8:21:00 AM

The very first line draws a reader like a magic ... what follows is simply grace and beauty ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/16/2018 8:04:00 AM

My friend, Liam I had commented on your wonderful poem when it was posted by Anne-Lise! Here is the comment: "Dazzling poetry written with sparkling language my dearest, Anne-Lise and dear Liam! Marvelously done! Congratulations"

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/16/2018 6:32:00 AM

Hi Liam n' Anne- Lise!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! So amazing! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + !A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^