- An Old Coin -

I have an old box
in that box, I have
collected many "treasures"
Not treasures of great value
but small memories of time
that has passed

This box is like a "scrapbook"
that makes me so happy
Look...look what I found today:
an old coin that is
marked by time

The coin is brown, a little thick
and need to be cleaned
The coin has a crown on
the one hand, value built
and the year standing
on the other side:
5 - cent from 1912

Such a coin from 1912
was probably a great wealth
It was probably not from
a "poor man`s" pocket

The coin has been owned
by many over the years
It has paid for food for
hungry bodies
Flour, sugar, bread, milk,
potatoes, onions and carrots
Perhaps the wool to knit socks

As the coin got older
it has lost its value
But for a child it was a big deal
You could buy both candy
and caramels
Maybe, it was put in
your "piggy bank"
Yes, what a story....
This little coin has,
traveled for many years








07.03.2012
A-L Andresen :)
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Date: 8/8/2013 8:40:00 PM
nicely done Anne - Lise,,,, I have a few old coins myself,,, not sure what century. haven't looked at them for a while ;} xo's
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Date: 8/10/2013 5:25:00 AM
- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/16/2013 10:39:00 AM
Anne Lise: This is a great Story/poem about a coin. If you still have the coin, It might be worth a lot of money by now. I once had a gold coin from 1914, it it was stolen. Thanks for sharing this with us. God bless. Lucilla
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Date: 1/16/2013 10:45:00 AM
There are many of those old coins in Norway, but thanks for the thought Lucilla. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/20/2012 7:01:00 AM
Wonderfully written my friend. Its amazing what we feel and something as simple as that. laurel
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Date: 6/20/2012 7:03:00 AM
Laurel, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 6/11/2012 3:17:00 PM
very nice my friend like it very much
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Date: 6/12/2012 3:26:00 AM
Kasim, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 5/2/2012 5:32:00 AM
Don't we all, sometimes, feel a little like that coin? Good work!
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Date: 5/2/2012 5:36:00 AM
You look not sooo old, thank you for visit and comments on my poem John. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 5/1/2012 4:19:00 PM
I bought an old penny for $90 a number of years ago. It has a Native American on its face as opposeed to current U.S. pennies which have Abe Lincoln on the face. Nice poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/2/2012 12:31:00 AM
Matthew, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 4/25/2012 3:26:00 PM
I liked this. I used to save a coin or two from each country I visited and like your poem I used to wonder about its travels and the lives it touched.
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Date: 4/25/2012 3:39:00 PM
Vince, thank you for visit and comments my poem today. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 4/17/2012 1:43:00 PM
Hello Norway. I have been reading a number of your poems and I like this one. It is difficult to hold on to things from our childhood, but this little coin has done the trick. Excellent write and subject matter.
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Date: 4/17/2012 2:02:00 PM
Steven, thank you for your time and comment. - oxox Anne-Lise
Date: 4/11/2012 11:03:00 AM
Unique and different once again how wonderful. Another picture painted and a story told. A hugg for this one.
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Date: 4/11/2012 11:11:00 AM
Thank you Terry for visit and comments my poem. - Hug back to you. - oxox Anne-Lise
Date: 3/21/2012 12:18:00 PM
The history of a poem is always facinating. Good write... good poem.
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Date: 3/21/2012 12:21:00 PM
:) Thank you for visit and comments my poem Carol. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Carol Eastman
Date: 3/21/2012 12:19:00 PM
I meant coin... sorry
Date: 3/16/2012 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations!! Anne-Lise!! :) such a sweet poem...well done...isn't it great to go through those holes in time...Big Hugggss~Deb~
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Date: 3/16/2012 12:57:00 PM
Thank you Deb. for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/15/2012 5:40:00 PM
congratulations on your poem placing in this contest.
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Date: 3/16/2012 1:48:00 AM
Thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox Anne-Lise
Date: 3/15/2012 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Treasure Trove" contest Anne Lise. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/15/2012 12:57:00 PM
Thank you Carol for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/15/2012 8:21:00 AM
Five cent in those days bought some nice things, the 1912 nickel was a buffalo nickel..a lovely story poem.I enjoyed reading it.God bless you.Hugs!Erich
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Date: 3/15/2012 8:31:00 AM
Thank you Erich for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/14/2012 8:25:00 PM
what an imaginative poem, thinking of the places that coin has traveled. WELL done and congrats on your win, sweetie.
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Date: 3/15/2012 2:54:00 AM
Thank you Andrea for reading and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/14/2012 4:19:00 PM
You are so right. That little coin of a century in age, could tell many stories. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/14/2012 4:25:00 PM
Thank you Joyce for reading and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/14/2012 10:49:00 AM
Congrats, Anne-Lise. You turned an old coin into treasure by bringing history back to life in our minds. I think is a lovely poem. Thanks, Sarah.
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Date: 3/14/2012 10:54:00 AM
Thank you Sarah. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/14/2012 10:16:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Anne Lisa. Excellent. Interesting. Enjoyed. Thanks for your comments on my recent postings. Luv and hugs, Ralph
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Date: 3/14/2012 10:53:00 AM
Thank you Ralph. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/13/2012 9:05:00 PM
congrats Anne Lise on a sweet success for this marvelous entry.. although longer than 12 line limit I felt it so worthy of a top ten win for it's quality dontent luv.. thankxxx for supporting..
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Date: 3/14/2012 4:48:00 AM
Thank you L.M. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/11/2012 1:49:00 PM
Anne Lise, I enjoyed this write of yours. Really hope your weekend's been a good one, thank you for your kind comments always :) xox
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Date: 3/11/2012 3:06:00 PM
Thank you Wilma for reading and comments my poem today.- oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/11/2012 8:16:00 AM
Coin got its own value but due to passage of time, value is changed. An old man in the house of young stars, I feel. Lovely done, my sweet friend, loved always, bl
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Date: 3/11/2012 8:21:00 AM
Thank you bl for reading and comments my poem. - oxox friend Anne-Lise
Date: 3/10/2012 7:46:00 PM
I love this poem.. It is so wonderful and filled with wisdom..xoxoPatrick
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Date: 3/11/2012 6:17:00 AM
Thank you Patrick for reading and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/10/2012 6:51:00 PM
Loved this beautiful write Anne....Lovely all the way through Love Jon
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Date: 3/11/2012 6:16:00 AM
Thank you Jon for reading and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/10/2012 7:35:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this poem because you presented your story about your coin in an original way. You see the bigger meaning. This poem is a treasure.
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Date: 3/11/2012 6:15:00 AM
Thank you Gail for reading and sweet comments on my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/10/2012 6:56:00 AM
I like this poem and the story behind it. Thanks for reading my recent work.
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Date: 3/10/2012 7:09:00 AM
Thank you Jancarl for reading and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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