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~If I can stop one Heart from breaking, I shall not live in vain. If I can ease one Life the Aching, Or cool the pain...

The sun burns crimson bright The strongest color of red that feels right Tell the world the whole story Because I know it's no glory And the darkness ate the moon A part of the underworld, a typhoon Pain that burns like gasoline on fire The ashes which are left telling all his lies Misery no sweet fruit, eat creeping snails It would work for those who were locked in jail You must be able to cope with a shovel The truth should be presented with your own muscles 24.09.2017 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Maria Williams

Date: 9/26/2017 9:12:00 AM

You excel in every style Anne-Lise, and this is exceptionally good. Awesome imagery....Maria xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/26/2017 11:43:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit & lovely comment, dear Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chuck Melugin

Date: 9/25/2017 5:44:00 PM

Dear Anne-Lise, The truth about the darkness is covered....waiting to be exposed by the light. You write off the charts! My best to you! chuck

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/26/2017 3:51:00 AM

- Chuck, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/25/2017 5:09:00 PM

Congrats on becoming a lifetime member! Emotional pain is just as much of a burden as physical pain. Let the light bring comfort. Blessings, Connie : )

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/26/2017 3:51:00 AM

- Connie, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenny Brewer

Date: 9/25/2017 5:06:00 PM

Hi Sunshine, Wow,great poem,right up my street....Very strongly felt xx JennyB xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/26/2017 3:50:00 AM

- Jenny, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Jordan

Date: 9/25/2017 4:51:00 PM

Anne-Lisa, This piece is darker than thieves; darker than night - broken hearts don't lie - they die in darkness. Great write....All the best Ken

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/26/2017 3:50:00 AM

- Ken, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/25/2017 10:30:00 AM

All are dark sins in a basket...nice place to visit lol Anne-Lise...great dark write my friend...god bless...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2017 12:11:00 PM

- Sometimes I have to dig a little deeper, though I feel more at home on the bright side W.W. - Glad you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 9/25/2017 10:21:00 AM

Oooh this is a dark one.. Sometimes we need to write outside our comfort zone and you did it wonderfully here..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2017 12:05:00 PM

- Sometimes I do ... more are ready to be posted :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 9/25/2017 7:20:00 AM

A somber write Anne..Nicely penned

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2017 7:53:00 AM

- Thank you for the great comment Joseph :) - Glad you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/25/2017 6:30:00 AM

Dark and deep, Anne-lise:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2017 7:00:00 AM

- Yes it is, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/25/2017 5:55:00 AM

Wow, a dark poem from you Anne-Lise, how rare that is! You have successfully written a frighteningly fearful poem here though my friend! The line, "The ashes which are left telling all his lies," oh, that is chilling, what a magnificent piece, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2017 5:58:00 AM

- A pleasure you enjoyed my "dark" poem, Russell :) - Thank you very much - appreciate your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/24/2017 10:51:00 PM

The dark elements treated so poetically ... Well written one Anne-Lise ... Enjoyed reading ...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2017 1:11:00 AM

- Thank you for the great comment Probir :) - Glad you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/24/2017 8:19:00 PM

Wow a strong and evocative write Anne-Lise. Dark imagery and great lines like; 'And the darkness ate the moon' - that line is genuine dark genius! A very emotive write too; 'Misery no sweet fruit, eat creeping snails' - magnificent! Enjoyed your poem tonight, glad I'm not sleeping alone lol! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2017 1:07:00 AM

- A pleasure you enjoyed my "dark" poem, Susan :) - Thank you very much - appreciate your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 9/24/2017 7:29:00 PM

Wonderful, Sunshine, the dark poetry is so hard for me to write, but I try.... Hugs Eve ~`*

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2017 1:05:00 AM

- I'm "trying" too, Eve :) - Thank you for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 9/24/2017 7:01:00 PM

Wow! I don't ever want to get on your bad side! Lovely writing, as we know.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2017 1:03:00 AM

- Life has both bright and dark sides, Sunlite :) - Thank you, very much appreciate your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/24/2017 6:04:00 PM

Welcome to the dark side! Loved this poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2017 1:01:00 AM

- I prefer sunshine, Arthur ... the darkness is too cold - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kevin Shaw

Date: 9/24/2017 4:46:00 PM

A Dark poem and a great picture. I must admit to not always understanding your poetry, but there is something about you writing that makes you stand out. Your read numbers are incredible, so you must have a great following, kindest regards, Kevin

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2017 12:58:00 AM

- I thought my "kitchen table poem" was way too simple ... and easy to understand, Kevin - Thank you for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Niall Fulham

Date: 9/24/2017 4:33:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise , not your normal style but I like it :::))))) hugs and I will have to leave the lights on ::)))

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2017 12:56:00 AM

- Sometimes I dive into the darkness, Niall ... changing theme :) - Thank you for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/24/2017 4:16:00 PM

your dark imagery and the picture sent a chill down my spine Anne Lise! Hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2017 12:53:00 AM

- Many thanks Jan, then I've hit the nail on the head :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/24/2017 4:14:00 PM

The picture and the bird tell a story of darkness and pain that comes through in your poem Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2017 12:51:00 AM

- A thank you to you Vijay, very much appreciate your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)