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- All Tears Floats Into the Ocean -

Of fire and colors a cosmic dimension is reflected
by your heart flame of polished silver

The stars shine sharply, sweet thoughts in a dream
Which travel through the vast heaven

Like the river flows safely to the sea
Why is the sea salty - perhaps tears of grief, loss and longing

These are the thoughts that fill my sleepless nights
If the dreams drift away, my passion will die















24.01.2018
(unrhymed couplets)
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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3rd place in contest

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Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 3/21/2018 12:16:00 AM Congratulations, Anne-Lise on your fine win. Login to Reply

Bartholomew Williams Date: 3/18/2018 11:28:00 AM Congratulations on a very thought-provoking poem, Anne-Lise (Sunshine Smile; love that handle! :) ), and your high placement in the contest. Blessings to you! :) Bartholomew Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/18/2018 12:30:00 PM - Many thanks for your comment and congratulations, Bartholomew :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gregory Richard Barden Date: 3/18/2018 3:01:00 AM Heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved win, Anne-Lise - blessings and best wishes to you, friend! :-) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/18/2018 7:26:00 AM - Thanks for the lovely comment and congratulations, Gregory :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sakshi Singh Date: 3/18/2018 12:10:00 AM Heart touching! Congrats on winning! Have an amazing day! :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/18/2018 7:25:00 AM - Sakshi, thanks for the lovely comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper Date: 3/17/2018 7:28:00 PM Sunshine, very well done and enjoyed reading.. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`* Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/18/2018 7:25:00 AM - Thanks for the lovely comment and congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus Date: 3/17/2018 2:47:00 PM A lovely poem in which all four couplets stand out with head held high, Anne-Lise! May passion's flames keep you faithful company:) Congrats on your fine win...hugs // paul Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/17/2018 2:53:00 PM - Thank you for your friendly visit, great comment and congratulations, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy Date: 3/17/2018 2:25:00 PM VERY lovely, Anne-Lise. CONGRATS! Janice Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/17/2018 2:45:00 PM - Thanks for the lovely comment and congratulations, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier Date: 3/17/2018 10:01:00 AM A sweet evocative poem, Sunshine. Lovely. Congrats. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/17/2018 2:44:00 PM - Thank you very much,   Line :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy Date: 2/1/2018 2:24:00 PM Very nice and smooth read. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/1/2018 2:32:00 PM - Appreciate the lovely feedback Abdullah, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams Date: 1/31/2018 6:55:00 AM Yes as long as we have beautiful dreams like these Anne-Lise, who can blame us for sleeping in? A lovely write my friend....Maria xxx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/1/2018 2:31:00 PM - Thanks for the lovely comment, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Francis J Grasso Date: 1/29/2018 10:28:00 AM Beautiful, Sunshine. ...Fran Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/30/2018 4:56:00 AM - Appreciate the lovely feedback Francis, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Swartz Date: 1/27/2018 11:57:00 PM A beauty in longing for sleep. Images that stay warm help you through the night and this poem will help my restless mind. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/28/2018 2:35:00 PM - Thank you for your friendly visit and great comment, James :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/27/2018 8:44:00 AM It is salty with yours and mine tears. Every time we cry we make the ocean, or river bigger. have a nice day my friend.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/27/2018 2:13:00 PM - Appreciate the lovely feedback Darlene, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel Date: 1/27/2018 5:50:00 AM Great thinking, Anne-lise, beautiful poetry:) hope you get your sleep back soon :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/27/2018 2:12:00 PM - Thanks for the lovely feedback on my poem ... always a pleasure, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith Date: 1/26/2018 10:02:00 AM so darling dear Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/27/2018 2:11:00 PM - Thank you for your friendly visit and great comment, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kharma Scribbles Kharmaticrhythm Date: 1/26/2018 6:37:00 AM This is gorgeous! I love Poe that incorporate the night sky and all of it's meaning! ?K.S Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/27/2018 1:42:00 PM - K.S., thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper Date: 1/25/2018 9:21:00 PM Thank you so very much, Anne-Lise, for the birthday blog.. you made my night very special . Hugs sweet friend Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/26/2018 3:49:00 AM - A pleasure, dear Eve :)

Eve Roper Date: 1/25/2018 5:23:00 PM Never thought of that , an ocean of tears .. Enjoyed reading Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/26/2018 3:51:00 AM - Thank you for your friendly visit and great comment, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman Date: 1/25/2018 3:02:00 PM Love these Anne-Lisa, number 3 especially. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/26/2018 3:50:00 AM - Thanks for the lovely feedback on my poem, Harry ... always a pleasure :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Melissa Tracy Date: 1/25/2018 12:22:00 PM Captivating are your dreams! Beautiful write! Best wishes! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/25/2018 1:40:00 PM - Thank you very much, Melissa :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley Date: 1/25/2018 2:09:00 AM Oh, to dream such dreams, Anne-Lise. Long live your passion. Viv x Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/25/2018 1:39:00 PM - Thank you for your friendly visit and great comment, Viv :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/25/2018 2:02:00 AM May your dreams remain so we your poetry forever would enjoy dearest, Anne-Lise! Superb writing my friend, hugsxx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/25/2018 1:39:00 PM - Thanks for the lovely feedback on my poem ... always a pleasure, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Donna Loughman Date: 1/24/2018 8:45:00 PM “Why is the sea salty - perhaps tears of grief, loss and longing” ...beautiful line..beautiful poem! Great title too :-) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/25/2018 1:37:00 PM - Donna, thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing Date: 1/24/2018 7:58:00 PM Simply beautiful dear Anne :) hugs and smiles :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/25/2018 1:36:00 PM - Thanks for the lovely feedback on my poem, Akkina ... always a pleasure :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter Date: 1/24/2018 6:34:00 PM Profound! Reads beautifully, too. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/25/2018 1:35:00 PM - Thank you for your friendly visit and great comment, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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