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13.03.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Appreciation, Anger, Air, Angelic -
Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Sotto Poet
Title 3/ Air

1st place in the contest

~ Live in the sunshine, swim the sea, drink the wild air. ~ (Ralph Waldo Emerson) The melody of the air plays in our hearts sailing on the high seas Sailors stories from a bygone era In lapping ripples to the raging waves of the harbor wind When the wind is strong, the light turns white Oh, you blessed air on your sightless wing As a cry capable of proclaiming itself lethal injections When air is slowly dying of toxic particles in polluted air Highlights an urgent situation minute by minute The lost sunshine without sparks, scratches and wounds Cannot be restored The disaster is complete synonymous with death The air is as kisses you didn't realize you longed for

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Thompson Emate

Date: 3/29/2024 6:00:00 AM

A lovely poem, Anne-Lise. It's worthy of a top win. I most especially like the line, "The air is as kisses you didn't realize you longed for." Congratulations.

Tonye George

Date: 3/29/2024 4:16:00 AM

Congratulations Anne on your win.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/28/2024 8:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Air" is a powerful write. Great picture. Hugs.... Have a blessed day.............

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/21/2024 5:51:00 AM

Anne-Lise, your environmental message is music to my ears! There's a long way to go to get this trodden planet healthy.

Peter Dome

Date: 3/14/2024 5:36:00 PM

A favourite. Love it. You have always had such a great talent. This one is incredibly artful and poetic. A masterclass. : Well done. Pete.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/17/2024 2:17:00 AM

- Peter, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 3/14/2024 10:51:00 AM

A contemporary poem on preservance of quality of air. Nice poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/14/2024 10:53:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Jay :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/14/2024 6:08:00 AM

The essence of the prompt so well captured, Anne-Lise. Amid nature there is much joy as you so well convey in this poem. Yet, we must be mindful to protect it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/14/2024 7:37:00 AM

- We all have a responsibility for nature, Vijay - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs