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Rapid mood swings from azure sky to tumbling cloud stumbling on gnarled roots In contrast; ... the horses that ran wild All selfishness disappears When we look at the evening sky dazzled by the shining stars which surrounds us on all sides Rapid mood swings as the flick of a light switch The mountain holds its breath in grace ... with no words gave a salute The rainbow glistened with moist laughter A symbol of love made of diamonds gives hope when you need it most Listening for the sound of the waterfalls that create lullabies 06.04.2023 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Free Submission Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Sotto Poet 10th place in the contest

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Date: 4/11/2023 10:35:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem Anne-Lise and congratulations on your win. love phyl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/8/2023 1:52:00 AM
- Many thanks for the comment and congratulations, Phyllis :) - hugs
Date: 4/10/2023 11:40:00 AM
Beautiful poetry Ann-Lise, I really like how you've described the fluctuating emotions in your poem. Congratulations on being selected as a winner of my contest...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/11/2023 7:28:00 AM
- Thank you very much for my win in your contest, Las :) - hugs
Date: 4/10/2023 4:38:00 AM
Very soft and touching, Anne-lise, congratulations:)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/10/2023 6:36:00 AM
- Many thanks for the comment and congratulations, Jo :) - hugs
Date: 4/9/2023 4:53:00 AM
Beautiful poetry Ann-Lise, love the way you’ve narrated mood swings. Congratulations on your win in Sotto’s contest… Belle
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/10/2023 6:35:00 AM
- Many thanks for the comment and congratulations, Belle :) - hugs
Date: 4/8/2023 11:35:00 PM
Congrats to win on your wonderful lovely poem. I am charmed. Love
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/10/2023 6:35:00 AM
- Many thanks for the comment and congratulations, Anisha :) - hugs
Date: 4/8/2023 7:00:00 AM
This poem dear poet is captivating in its visual serenity of soothing emotion
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/10/2023 6:34:00 AM
- Many thanks for the comment, Frederic :) - hugs
Date: 4/8/2023 5:14:00 AM
Anne-Lise, I can so relate to your beautiful words! You really created a perfect image of feelings as they flow!! Happy Saturday xxoo
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/10/2023 6:34:00 AM
- Many thanks for the comment, Mike :) - hugs
Date: 4/8/2023 2:40:00 AM
Captivating and inspiring poem that mesmerize the heart and mind. Congratulations, my beloved friend, Anne-Lise. Blessings
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/10/2023 6:33:00 AM
- Many thanks for the comment and congratulations, Demetrios :) - hugs
Date: 4/7/2023 11:54:00 PM
Back with congratulations dear Ann- Lise. Its really lovely.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/10/2023 6:33:00 AM
- Many thanks for the congratulations, Wendy :) - hugs
Date: 4/6/2023 1:16:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Sunshine! Best of luck!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/10/2023 6:32:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Ann :) - hugs
Date: 4/6/2023 11:45:00 AM
Wonderful poem Ann-Lise. Good luck in the contest. Hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/10/2023 6:31:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Wendy :) - hugs
Date: 4/6/2023 10:25:00 AM
Much enjoyed the two frames you depict in this poem. A lovely poem, Anne-Lise.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/10/2023 6:31:00 AM
- thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs

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