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Kan være et bilde av natur

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You sail in the wind along the edge of the globe The sea with white rippled waves The sun shines through the sails which is raining down from a rich universe Driving wind, salty lips, golden wings on cotton clouds The longing, the strength, wide and blue The moon and the tide, eternal renewal Joy and wonder, has no end 09/08/2021 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 10/30/2021 8:55:00 AM
A wonderful "Swan write." Your write comes to life. I can see everything. Hope you are OK. Have a beautiful/blessed autumn day.................
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Date: 8/19/2021 10:37:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write on your beautiful photo dear Anne... Have a lovely day... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 8/14/2021 10:07:00 AM
A wonderful poem to match your picture. love phyl
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Date: 8/12/2021 12:24:00 PM
My Dad's dream to retire in Greece on an Island and sail in the deep blue Mediterranean Sea - but alas died before that could happen. I have to fave this one Sunshine Smile as it brings back my Dad's memory so clearly. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 8/12/2021 9:44:00 AM
Your swan looks very serene here, as well as the beautiful moon is stunning. Wonderful poem, my friend Anne-Lise. Blessings and hugs
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Date: 8/11/2021 6:40:00 PM
Great imagery , Sunshine.
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Date: 8/11/2021 6:51:00 AM
Wondrous poem, my dearest friend, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2021 8:21:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/10/2021 5:03:00 PM
I really love this serene piece, my friend! You are a great photographer too! Hugs ~ mala
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2021 8:21:00 AM
- Mala, thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/10/2021 1:48:00 PM
Your swan is so peaceful here, and your moon exquisite. Great poetry dear friend,
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2021 8:20:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments, Vie Rose :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/10/2021 12:03:00 PM
Hello Sunshine smile, your photo made me feel peaceful. A beautiful scene. i love the swans they are so graceful. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/12/2021 11:41:00 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile, you are welcome my friend. Hugs.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2021 8:20:00 AM
- Darlene, thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/9/2021 1:39:00 PM
This is so pretty. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 8/11/2021 8:20:00 AM
- Thank you very much Richard, for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/9/2021 1:12:00 PM
I really enjoyed this peaceful poem. Well written. Beautiful! :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2021 8:19:00 AM
- Heidi, thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/9/2021 12:43:00 PM
Such wonderful imagery Anne-Lise I love to see these graceful birds:-) hugs Jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2021 8:18:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/9/2021 12:41:00 PM
A beautiful poem and an equally lovely photo, Anne-Lise…
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2021 8:18:00 AM
- Ilene, thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/9/2021 11:19:00 AM
Hi Anne Lise...great verse that helps us see the Swan. They are so beautful I liked "golden wings on cotton clouds" And,,,,, Outstanding photo... Panagiota
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2021 8:17:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments, Pangie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/9/2021 11:16:00 AM
Beautiful birds, they're so graceful, we have them on the Avon in town. Tom
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2021 8:17:00 AM
- Tom, thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/9/2021 8:39:00 AM
Great imagery. You bring the swan to life. So beautiful to envisage. Hugs.
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Date: 8/11/2021 8:16:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/9/2021 4:30:00 AM
Lovely write. The sun shines through the sails which is raining down from a rich universe..... golden wings..... So beautiful
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2021 8:16:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments, Rama :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/9/2021 3:56:00 AM
A joy to read, you crafted a day of sailing wonderfully well...Delice
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2021 8:15:00 AM
- Delice, thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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