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- a Saudade Poem - About Emotions -

The day you died, I died with you You were my anchor that I played The grief burdened through lonely nights Feelings I always try to deny Our tender melody has stopped playing Alone I am a marble figure 02/20/2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Saudade Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh 3rd place in the contest

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/25/2019 4:11:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this emotive poem, Sunshine.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/26/2019 2:53:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and congratulations, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 2/24/2019 9:45:00 PM

Good to end with the consequences of loss, lovely poem that reads easily, enjoyed it Sunshine Smile

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/25/2019 12:42:00 PM

- Many thanks Sheri, for your lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/24/2019 2:19:00 PM

I enjoyed your imagery in this one, Anne Lise. Congrats in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/25/2019 12:42:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting and congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 2/24/2019 8:53:00 AM

Thanks for taking part in my contest, Anne-Lise!:-) Nicely done! Congratulations on your win!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/24/2019 1:10:00 PM

- A pleasant surprise ... many thanks for my place on your list of winners, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 2/23/2019 3:59:00 PM

such emotion is so few lines the final line is one I think many with a broken heart can relate to:-( hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/24/2019 1:09:00 PM

- Many thanks Jan, for your lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/23/2019 11:37:00 AM

Feel the emotions on this write and yes a very sad time it is. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/23/2019 2:14:00 PM

- Many thanks Phyllis, for your nice comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/21/2019 1:19:00 PM

Wow soul sister - you are exemplary to poetry soup - your poems sing a variety of forms - each with its own radiance! Best of luck. Well done Anne-Lise. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/21/2019 2:24:00 PM

- Thanks for the beautiful words ... I still have a lot to learn ... you are so kind, my soul sister Jennifer :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/21/2019 10:02:00 AM

The emotion flows in this one. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go ..Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/21/2019 12:29:00 PM

- Many thanks Sara, for your lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/21/2019 6:06:00 AM

When one loses the one they love they hold still and forget to breathe , may the sunlight find you and them. xo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/21/2019 7:02:00 AM

- Pixie, many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 2/21/2019 6:03:00 AM

Superbly written Anne-Lise...with such few words...you carry much...excellent entry...and thank you for continued support my dear friend...I've been on a bit of a break...catching up on things, outside the poetry world...love & light...^WW^...{*J*}

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/21/2019 7:00:00 AM

- Yes, there is a world outside "the soup world" too - Many thanks for your visit and comment, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/21/2019 3:59:00 AM

Beautifully penned with great imagery; flows well and brings the image to life for me.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/21/2019 4:26:00 AM

- M.L., many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/21/2019 3:31:00 AM

What beautiful poetry, I felt every line!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/21/2019 4:25:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 2/20/2019 9:21:00 PM

i understand the stone marble of a broken heart

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/21/2019 4:24:00 AM

- Many thanks Timothy, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/20/2019 7:30:00 PM

Well expressed! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/21/2019 4:24:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/20/2019 5:10:00 PM

Poetic chiseling bringing to life a tribute so fine! Great writing dearest, Anne-Lise ! Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/21/2019 4:23:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/20/2019 4:17:00 PM

A memorial..a tribute..well done, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/21/2019 4:23:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/20/2019 3:37:00 PM

a heart- throbbing write with a greeat end line, anne...just splendid!....happy huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/21/2019 4:22:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 2/20/2019 2:59:00 PM

ooh - so sad, anne-lise, but so beautifully expressed! best of luck in the contest...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/21/2019 4:22:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/20/2019 1:50:00 PM

Wonderful entry Anne-Lise, best wishes...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/20/2019 1:59:00 PM

- Your poem made me write this, Charlie ... thank you, my friend :) - My name has never been on E. I. winning list ... but, life goes on :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)