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I met a tiny green worm her name was Milla Storm. On a branch the worm breathed sleepy "a little rest in the sun can't hurt me". She woke up stiff, numb and compact a deep long sleep, that's a fact. "Something stings and scratches on my back" complained sad ... such an unpleasant smack. She felt so isolated and trapped - almost as kidnapped. Had to fight bravely through the cocoon as she hummed a joyful tune. Milla tried to stretch out her feet suddenly she noticed something sweet. "Close your eyes - look I can fly ... F-L-Y I'm a gorgeous butterfly". 07.03.2023 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Kids Creativity and Learning Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper 1st place in the contest

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/3/2023 10:11:00 AM

A wonderful nursery rhyme... I can see a child's eyes growing wide with wonder as they read this one... Congratulations on your win, Anne-Lise!

Len Gasun

Date: 3/25/2023 7:41:00 PM

So fantastic and beautiful nursery rhyme my dear friend Annelise. So enjoyable to read. I love it especially the ending. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 3/20/2023 3:42:00 PM

Anne-Lise, congratulation on your win. Thank you so much for creating a wonderful educational nursery rhyme for the contest. Many blessings to you. Eve

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 3/20/2023 1:59:00 PM

Awww...so sweet, Dear Anne-Lise! Such a great rhyming...and the ending is perfect/fabulous!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/20/2023 12:31:00 PM

Nicely done Anne-Lise! These are so much fun to write, and to read! Congratulations on your win! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2023 12:26:00 PM

back with congrats. Yours was one of my favorites on the green worm theme.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/20/2023 11:28:00 AM

Back with Congratulation on your win. A fun write/picture. I enjoyed reading it again. Have a blessed day..................

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/20/2023 10:57:00 AM

Back to say congratulations on the win in Eve’s contest… Belle

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/20/2023 10:50:00 AM

This beautiful poetry may be read and enjoyed by people of all ages. I enjoyed reading this, and congrats on your win.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/20/2023 8:48:00 AM

Lovely poem. Hearty Congratulations. So sweet.. Hugs

Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/20/2023 4:58:00 AM

Excellent composition. All the best for contest. Love.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/23/2023 8:17:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Anisha :) - hugs

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/19/2023 3:13:00 PM

That so good Anne-Lise, love all the lines in the nursery rhyme and the beautiful ending… Hugs, Belle :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/23/2023 8:17:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Belle :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/12/2023 6:35:00 AM

Excellent, Good luck in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/12/2023 2:07:00 PM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment on my nursery rhyme poem, Wendy :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2023 12:59:00 PM

So adorable. I can't wait to do a poem on the green worm.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/12/2023 2:06:00 PM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Andrea :) - hugs

Howard Kerr

Date: 3/9/2023 6:04:00 AM

Hello Sunshine Smile, These couplets are witty, humorous, and charming. Flawless and free-flowing. Thank you so much for your generous review of my extended Rainbow piece. Warm regards Howard

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/8/2023 9:07:00 PM

Very sweet one, Anne-lise:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/9/2023 2:12:00 AM

- Thanks so much, Jo :) - hugs

Valsa George

Date: 3/8/2023 8:55:00 PM

The metamorphosis of the worm into a butterfly is so remarkably delineated ! I am sure Eve will rate it as one of the Best. Smile, dear Smile ! Love and hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/9/2023 2:11:00 AM

- What matters most is that she likes it and can use it in her book ... many thanks for your lovely comment, Valsa :) - hugs

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/8/2023 10:51:00 AM

So delightful!!! Needs to be an illustrated booklet for children to be magically read and explained. A treasure. A FAVE!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2023 11:18:00 AM

- A fave really came as a surprise ... I'm so insecure when I write in rhyme ... easy in my mother tongue ... but not in English ... many thanks, Joe :) - hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/8/2023 9:24:00 AM

A very cute and entertaining poem, my dearest, Anne-Lise. Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2023 11:19:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Demetrios :) - hugs

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/8/2023 8:18:00 AM

Very sweet poem I enjoyed this :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2023 11:20:00 AM

- Thank you, dear Heidi ... glad you enjoy it :) - hugs

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 3/8/2023 6:35:00 AM

Wow what a lovely poem , one of your best in super rhyming, transformation from caterpillar to butterfly. Kudos!! <<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>*>>>>>>>>>>*********** Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2023 11:22:00 AM

- A pleasure to receive your comment and a pleasure to read your poem ... thank you, S.zaynab :) - hugs

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/8/2023 3:38:00 AM

Anne-Lise, this is wonderful!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2023 11:22:00 AM

- Thanks so much, Tania :) - hugs

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/8/2023 2:35:00 AM

I guess brilliant minds think alike:) Your's is sweet, Anne. I know Eve will like it. Have a wonderful day.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2023 11:23:00 AM

- I hope Eve will like it... many thanks for your lovely comment, Daniel :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/8/2023 1:55:00 AM

Cute nursery rhyme, dear Anne Lise. Best for a win. Hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2023 11:25:00 AM

- Thank you for your comment, Victor :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/7/2023 1:35:00 PM

Ahh!! I like this one. I had one in mind for this contest, alas, I did not get it written in time for the contest. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page with a kind review. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2023 11:26:00 AM

- Send a contribution ... the contest is not full yet - Many thanks for your comment on my poem, Sara :) - hugs