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- A Little Bit of Magic - Nursery Rhyme -

      I met a tiny green worm
      her name was Milla Storm.

      On a branch the worm breathed sleepy
      "a little rest in the sun can't hurt me".

      She woke up stiff, numb and compact
      a deep long sleep, that's a fact.

      "Something stings and scratches on my back"
      complained sad ... such an unpleasant smack.

      She felt so isolated and trapped -
      almost as kidnapped.

      Had to fight bravely through the cocoon
      as she hummed a joyful tune.

      Milla tried to stretch out her feet
      suddenly she noticed something sweet.

      "Close your eyes - look I can fly ... F-L-Y 
       I'm a gorgeous butterfly".





07.03.2023
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Kids Creativity and Learning Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Eve Roper
1st place in the contest

Copyright © Anne-Lise Andresen | Year Posted 2023

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Kelly Deschler Date: 4/3/2023 10:11:00 AM A wonderful nursery rhyme... I can see a child's eyes growing wide with wonder as they read this one... Congratulations on your win, Anne-Lise! Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 3/25/2023 7:41:00 PM So fantastic and beautiful nursery rhyme my dear friend Annelise. So enjoyable to read. I love it especially the ending. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 3/20/2023 3:42:00 PM Anne-Lise, congratulation on your win. Thank you so much for creating a wonderful educational nursery rhyme for the contest. Many blessings to you. Eve Login to Reply

Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 3/20/2023 1:59:00 PM Awww...so sweet, Dear Anne-Lise! Such a great rhyming...and the ending is perfect/fabulous! Login to Reply

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 3/20/2023 12:31:00 PM Nicely done Anne-Lise! These are so much fun to write, and to read! Congratulations on your win! :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/20/2023 12:26:00 PM back with congrats. Yours was one of my favorites on the green worm theme. Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/20/2023 11:28:00 AM Back with Congratulation on your win. A fun write/picture. I enjoyed reading it again. Have a blessed day.................. Login to Reply

Beryl Edmonds Date: 3/20/2023 10:57:00 AM Back to say congratulations on the win in Eve’s contest… Belle Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 3/20/2023 10:50:00 AM This beautiful poetry may be read and enjoyed by people of all ages. I enjoyed reading this, and congrats on your win. Login to Reply

Speaks Volumes Date: 3/20/2023 8:48:00 AM Lovely poem. Hearty Congratulations. So sweet.. Hugs Login to Reply

Anisha Dutta Date: 3/20/2023 4:58:00 AM Excellent composition. All the best for contest. Love. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/23/2023 8:17:00 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Anisha :) - hugs

Beryl Edmonds Date: 3/19/2023 3:13:00 PM That so good Anne-Lise, love all the lines in the nursery rhyme and the beautiful ending… Hugs, Belle :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/23/2023 8:17:00 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Belle :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes Date: 3/12/2023 6:35:00 AM Excellent, Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/12/2023 2:07:00 PM - Many thanks for the lovely comment on my nursery rhyme poem, Wendy :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/9/2023 12:59:00 PM So adorable. I can't wait to do a poem on the green worm. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/12/2023 2:06:00 PM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Andrea :) - hugs

Howard Kerr Date: 3/9/2023 6:04:00 AM Hello Sunshine Smile, These couplets are witty, humorous, and charming. Flawless and free-flowing. Thank you so much for your generous review of my extended Rainbow piece. Warm regards Howard Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 3/8/2023 9:07:00 PM Very sweet one, Anne-lise:) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/9/2023 2:12:00 AM - Thanks so much, Jo :) - hugs

Valsa George Date: 3/8/2023 8:55:00 PM The metamorphosis of the worm into a butterfly is so remarkably delineated ! I am sure Eve will rate it as one of the Best. Smile, dear Smile ! Love and hugs. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/9/2023 2:11:00 AM - What matters most is that she likes it and can use it in her book ... many thanks for your lovely comment, Valsa :) - hugs

Joe Dimino Date: 3/8/2023 10:51:00 AM So delightful!!! Needs to be an illustrated booklet for children to be magically read and explained. A treasure. A FAVE! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/8/2023 11:18:00 AM - A fave really came as a surprise ... I'm so insecure when I write in rhyme ... easy in my mother tongue ... but not in English ... many thanks, Joe :) - hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/8/2023 9:24:00 AM A very cute and entertaining poem, my dearest, Anne-Lise. Hugs xxx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/8/2023 11:19:00 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Demetrios :) - hugs

Heidi Sands Date: 3/8/2023 8:18:00 AM Very sweet poem I enjoyed this :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/8/2023 11:20:00 AM - Thank you, dear Heidi ... glad you enjoy it :) - hugs

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri Date: 3/8/2023 6:35:00 AM Wow what a lovely poem , one of your best in super rhyming, transformation from caterpillar to butterfly. Kudos!! <<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>*>>>>>>>>>>*********** Plz also read and comment my newest poem too. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/8/2023 11:22:00 AM - A pleasure to receive your comment and a pleasure to read your poem ... thank you, S.zaynab :) - hugs

Tania Kitchin Date: 3/8/2023 3:38:00 AM Anne-Lise, this is wonderful! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/8/2023 11:22:00 AM - Thanks so much, Tania :) - hugs

Daniel Turner Date: 3/8/2023 2:35:00 AM I guess brilliant minds think alike:) Your's is sweet, Anne. I know Eve will like it. Have a wonderful day. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/8/2023 11:23:00 AM - I hope Eve will like it... many thanks for your lovely comment, Daniel :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar Date: 3/8/2023 1:55:00 AM Cute nursery rhyme, dear Anne Lise. Best for a win. Hugs. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/8/2023 11:25:00 AM - Thank you for your comment, Victor :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/7/2023 1:35:00 PM Ahh!! I like this one. I had one in mind for this contest, alas, I did not get it written in time for the contest. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page with a kind review. Sara Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/8/2023 11:26:00 AM - Send a contribution ... the contest is not full yet - Many thanks for your comment on my poem, Sara :) - hugs

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