- A Kiss In The Dark -

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13.12.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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This or That, Vol 29 - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

4th place in the contest

Dusk, depicted two silhouettes Silence under the glow of a street lamp Blushing and smiling a little nervously A seemingly random touch, breathless excitement Passionate lips, soft and slow Fireworks display from the rainbow The miracle was there for them alone This kiss left both quite weightless on pink clouds

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 12/29/2024 4:50:00 PM

Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully composed poem, Anne-Lise. Enjoyed it. Wishing you a Happy New Year!

Duke Beaufort

Date: 12/17/2024 7:52:00 AM

Anne-Lise, gotta love when an experience like this gets a brilliant description. The joy of romance makes us all smile...so thanks for this one!!

Paige Hind

Date: 12/16/2024 9:04:00 AM

Lovely writing - very romantic <3

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2024 9:12:00 AM

- Thank you very much for your comment, Paige :) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 12/15/2024 9:35:00 AM

Ah this is so beautiful and made my heart smile! How soul warming! Brilliant verse on the prompt! Absolutely loved reading this! Best wishes for the contest too

Len Gasun

Date: 12/15/2024 6:40:00 AM

Such a superb romantic poem you've crafted my dear poet Anne-lise. One of my favorites among the romantic poems I've read. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes as well to you. Hugs God bless you always and your poetry.