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--A Christmas Memory--

--A CHRISTMAS MEMORY--


Twelfth midnight, big bell in the Church nearby singing Ding! Dong! Ding! Dong!

Floating Christmas carols and cheers bubble to plague warmth the freezing air!

Old and young wearing wide winsome smiles, they hug and kiss in delight,

while I in my scrub-suit is calling! Calling the father of the newborn, I am holding!
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~A Christmas Memory - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Broken Wings~

__Olive Eloisa Guillermo__
November 25, 2015

Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2015

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Len Gasun Date: 12/5/2015 7:24:00 AM What a very wonderful poem and Christmas memory this is my dear amiga Olive. Many Congrats on your win! Cheeers!!! love lots and big hugs, Leonora Login to Reply

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Date: 12/2/2015 1:01:00 PM Congratulations Olive Eloisa. Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 12/1/2015 10:49:00 PM Beautiful story, Olive, congratulations on your win! Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 12/1/2015 4:54:00 PM What a great Christmas memory, Olive. And what a wonderful present you helped deliver! Love your poem, and congrats on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Michael Tor Date: 12/1/2015 4:26:00 PM Wow Olive great write and wonderful experience. Love this one. My wife is an RN. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/1/2015 3:53:00 PM Hey, there. CONGRATS. Login to Reply

Dan Cwiak Date: 12/1/2015 3:29:00 PM Olive, your writing continues to amaze and inspire me to be a better writer. Thank you for this memory and congrats on the win. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 12/1/2015 1:06:00 PM Olive, Congratulations on your Christmas Memory win. Luv **SKAT** Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/1/2015 12:04:00 PM - It is rare that I participate in anyone contest ...... however, this was so nice - Many great and some sad memories we shared - Congratulations with your poems, Olive :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Teddy Kimathi Date: 12/1/2015 6:22:00 AM Splendid imagery, filled with life! Congrats Olive! ;-) Login to Reply

Balveen Cheema Date: 12/1/2015 3:30:00 AM Congrats on your placement , Olive! Login to Reply

Susan Gentry Date: 12/1/2015 1:51:00 AM Congrats on the contest win! What an awesome memory, well-written poem. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 12/1/2015 1:46:00 AM Absolutely wonderful memory Olive congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Viv Wigley Date: 12/1/2015 1:32:00 AM To have such a memory, bringing new life and joy on such a day, Olive. Lovely write, well done. Viv x Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 11/30/2015 11:31:00 PM Lovely memory so beautifully penned dear Olive.. congrats on big win! Login to Reply

Suzanne Delaney Date: 11/29/2015 11:29:00 PM Great memory...always a relief when there are no complications. Good for you. SuZ Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/29/2015 5:35:00 PM oh wow you are a nurse, Olive?? How sweet this is!! Login to Reply

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 11/29/2015 1:40:00 AM Excellent. Beautifully said. All the best for contest. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 11/27/2015 3:49:00 PM What a beautiful memory such would be at Christmas, and any other time of the year. Beautiful image visualising the father approaching to view their newborn. I love this Olive for reasons yet to be born. Hugs always // your James xx~xx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 12/9/2015 7:04:00 AM I know the reasons Huge one, longing!!! thanks much for the generous remark.. =`) HUgs! ~Olive ELoisa

Paul Callus Date: 11/27/2015 12:42:00 PM I truly enjoyed this poem Olive_eloi! Your entry and mine were written telepathically:) We both talk of a new born child. Hugs // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 12/9/2015 7:01:00 AM hehehe, very cute!!! Immediately after I read your I smiled widely!~Olive Eloisa =`)

Emile Pinet Date: 11/26/2015 6:06:00 PM The words are descriptive and float their presence onto the page with a smile and a splash of pride that captures the reader's imagination and attention. Emile. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 12/8/2015 5:46:00 AM thank you so much Emile.. =`) your comments I enjoyed reading because they are quite poetic .. =`) ~O.E.

Skat A Date: 11/26/2015 7:22:00 AM Olive,,, thank you for sharing your poem. Happy Thanksgiving. Love Skat Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/30/2015 12:15:00 AM Thanks much Skat.. =`) thanks always for your drop by.. =`)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/25/2015 1:36:00 PM - Beautiful, it is a winning poem Olive !!! - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/27/2015 1:05:00 AM Thanks much Anne Lise.. =`) God bless and thanks.. =`)

Barbara Gorelick Date: 11/25/2015 11:19:00 AM Love this! I have worked my share of holidays and except for being away from family I truly enjoyed them. This is so sweet. BG Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/27/2015 1:02:00 AM I can count the few days I have my family complete BG... My father had been working abroad and most of the time his home its not even CHristmas, when he is here for Christmas I also sometimes not home... =`) thanks much BG.. hugs!