---Strong Hands That Still Roam

strong hands that still roam learn to linger thoughtfully over the high points

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 6/30/2011 7:52:00 AM

good one!!

George Aul

Date: 6/29/2011 11:46:00 AM

Congrats on your win........George

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/29/2011 8:53:00 AM

This one caught my attentions. Strong hands that still roam puts many thoughts into the head ha ha. Excellent. love phyl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/28/2011 2:46:00 AM

Dear Deb, I agree with Barbara! Incredible senryu. Congratulations. Love, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/27/2011 9:06:00 PM

I would have given this a number 1..it really is so sensual...congrats. BG

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 6/28/2011 4:55:00 AM

Thanks Barb not all those in the top 10 were senryu, so much work is needed on the japanese forms, no cut oe season word is required but phrases versuses sentences is still a must and no punctuation, yet poems with both of those errors were in the top 10