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---Siren's Breath

siren’s breath fog licks the lip of rock shore--- lighthouse halleluiah

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/7/2012 3:39:00 PM

wow...blessed...pd

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 3/3/2011 7:44:00 AM

Well deserved win, Debbie! Beautifully thought out and projected. You are a woman of profound talent and ability. Best to you, Mikki

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/28/2011 11:04:00 AM

Congratulations Debbie, on your well deserved win in the contest " What My Eyes See" sponsored by Annalise Brigham. Love, Carol

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/28/2011 9:39:00 AM

Hello Debbie, Congratulations on your win in the contest with this lovely Haiku As Always, Shar

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/27/2011 4:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Ralph Taylor

Date: 2/27/2011 1:04:00 PM

Congrats on a well deserved win, Deb. Nice going. xxxRalph

Kash Poet

Date: 2/27/2011 11:49:00 AM

Liked the middle line !Congrats on your win Debbie---kashinath

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/27/2011 10:55:00 AM

Just because you can do the form doesn't mean you can do it well, I'm fully aware my haiku would not even make it to a grocery store check out line paper. But, thanks for commiserating I will try to do better next time.

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/27/2011 8:37:00 AM

halleluiah....indeed!! I am sure many a mariner has said just that upon first sighting of a lighthouse beacon!! love it!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/27/2011 8:35:00 AM

Congrats on your win with this very visual haiku, Debbie-- liked how you used siren over here :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/27/2011 7:37:00 AM

Congrats Debbie on your wonderful win in the Haiku contest with another fabulous write luv.. enjoy your sweet success and top ten win...

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/27/2011 3:18:00 AM

hey this was undoubtly one of the very best for me.many warm congrats for this success.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2011 11:29:00 PM

Deb, yours was quite visual and I really enjoyed it. Congratulations.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/26/2011 9:59:00 PM

Really unique and interesting write. Congratlations Debbie. Love, Joyce

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/26/2011 8:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your 7th Place Win in my contest, Deb. Annalise

Kash Poet

Date: 2/25/2011 7:34:00 PM

Amazing Haiku!A great entry into the contest!---kashinath

James Marshall Goff

Date: 2/25/2011 6:15:00 PM

I've been there on the shore of Lake Superior.....when daylight vanishes before time.... you are correct, Miss

James Peranteau

Date: 2/25/2011 9:25:00 AM

An awesome write here Debbie ! I see a few more of your writes I want to read, so off I go ! And, you have mail. much love, james

Elaine George

Date: 2/25/2011 9:09:00 AM

Sensational interpretation, Deb. Lainie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/24/2011 10:37:00 PM

I really really like the personification of this one, Deb!! That middle line rocks. Do you mean sirens breathe or siren's breath. I am thinking the second one, with the noun breath.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/24/2011 5:23:00 PM

Im amazed at how many ways there are to see the picture. The last line made me smile. BG

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/24/2011 4:08:00 PM

What a perspective to read the picture, Deb

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/24/2011 4:00:00 PM

Good luck in the contest with this creative sure winner...Sara