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----------------------------Dancing With Eve----

We danced through words black silk of her hair calmed my nerves we danced through words lovers enticed through songs of birds one magic Eve a man deserves lost in the taste of all her curves we danced through words ~JSLambert Esquire *personally written for Nette Onclaud's WEAVE A RONDELET Contest!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/25/2011 11:55:00 PM

well, JS. I have to go off Soup soon, so I can't find a poem of yours I have not read. Coming back to this one. I REALLY like this one. Thanks for your comments! Luv, Andrea

John Aaron Green

Date: 10/15/2011 3:59:00 PM

very nice,,,great meaning from man to woman...

Nancy Jones

Date: 9/25/2011 6:53:00 PM

ahhh, them magic eves.. Beautiful, JSL esq. Congrats and happy day~N

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/24/2011 5:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with your Weave A Rondelet poem Jasper. Love, Carol

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 9/23/2011 2:36:00 PM

Wonderful write JS love the danced through word enticed by songs of birds...with love....old Jack

Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 9/23/2011 2:37:00 PM

oh by the way good luck on contest!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/23/2011 7:31:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, JSLambart

Margaret Foster

Date: 9/23/2011 5:05:00 AM

Well done JS. glad the magic Eve was found.... cheers Marg

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 9/23/2011 3:42:00 AM

whoa..i am loving this one...really nice JS... Congrats my friend....ALL SMILES...chiquita

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/22/2011 9:54:00 PM

so then, you must be high on LIFE, like me (except when I am grumbling about my back. haha). I too adore that little birdhouse song you mentioned! And hey, a big congrats on your win for those splendid poem. what did I tell you!

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 9/22/2011 8:48:00 PM

very sensuous poem. i love the line "one magic Eve a man deserves" and the whole idea of dancing through words. congratulations on your win!

John Freeman

Date: 9/22/2011 7:28:00 PM

JS, A pleasure to see this top win for you. Congratulations on a worthy top poem, Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/22/2011 5:33:00 PM

Congrats JS on a super fantastic first place win luv..

Dan Kearley

Date: 9/22/2011 4:52:00 PM

Very Nicely done! I must say...Lots of fans I see.Thats what happens with well written word though. :-)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/22/2011 8:03:00 AM

A sensuous masterpiece! Not a doubt how well this one will fair in the contest.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/22/2011 6:33:00 AM

Greatly woven..Enjoyed your work this morn..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the kind review of my work..I enjoyed writing that one about the Organdy fabric..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/22/2011 1:37:00 AM

another souo mail... IMPT!!! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/22/2011 1:27:00 AM

joey, Nette is absolutely going to LOVE yours here. I am pretty sure!!! You seem very funny over here today. I've been reading your comments all over the place. Are you high? hahaha. Luv, Andrea

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/22/2011 1:27:00 AM

soup mail..:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/21/2011 6:56:00 PM

lovely lines JS.. please accept my apology for calling u Jasper ..however there is another poet on PS who also uses JS in his name.. forgive the "Sweetheart"... much success in Nette's contest with this rare beauty luv..

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/21/2011 6:16:00 PM

Nicely done! Kim