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(re Write) Nothing

Tis nothing to say I love you Tis nothing to say Be mine Tis nothing now a days to make promises to The Allmighty Devine Tis nothing for me to tell myself that I'll love you till the end of time Tis nothing till I wait for all spirals to unwind all unions to unbind all joined together to fall apart the destruction of everything called art Till I capture the love of your soul and heart I am nothing not even a spark

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/17/2010 6:54:00 AM

Your poem captures the urgency of one who wishes to have love returned so well, John. But in my life you are more than a spark -- a bright ray of sunshine that brings joy. Love, Carolyn

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/16/2010 8:50:00 PM

Yes, you do sparkle our hearts on the soup with your poetry. God Bless Phyl

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 7/14/2010 6:35:00 AM

You are not a spark,but you sparkle our hearts with sweet poetry,dear john..Celene

Diiamond Rich

Date: 7/13/2010 6:54:00 AM

A beautiful read. Also thank you for your kind words on my latest if you have time please check out my saga, criminal part 3- ofcourse its not true just a story. Have a great day.

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson

Date: 7/12/2010 5:18:00 PM

Very nice write. Have a great day! Scarlett

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/12/2010 3:50:00 PM

Hope that you get that spark..Sara