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Today March 2 2021

Coasting on a thermal
that is how I feel today
so many changes
my head and heart are relieved

Today I breathe the sea
this morning I glide
on a smooth coating of perhaps

Hear the sound of nature
against the sky
mold my thoughts to the ether
absolve myself of innocent sins

Today I breathe the sea
in the afternoon a walk of contemplation
to hover cautiously with each step

Outside the world calls
crossroads always branching
again, a pause for clarity
tomorrow will come hopefully

Today I breathe the sea
evening brings me eased mind
the shine of a thousand eyes


3-2-2021
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Date: 3/3/2021 9:20:00 AM
Enjoyed this peaceful write. Especially like the last line :)
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 3/29/2021 2:18:00 PM
A pleasure to have you stop and read, and especially comment. I have not had much time to write lately so look forward to the little I get to do here.
Date: 3/3/2021 7:10:00 AM
Fanciful write. Just one issue: the word "breath" is a noun. Did you intend to use the verb "breathe" in your lines?
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 3/29/2021 2:17:00 PM
Thanks Robert...indeed. thanks for stopping. Jeanne

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