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To Dad on his birthday

It's twenty fifth of May
Alas, you're miles away from me

flash back of mosaic memories 
when i was in your sight
brings back scents of home 
exuding  like curry
from mom's kitchen
as you serenade her
with songs she used to sing 
to make me sleep on rainy eve.

Oh Dad, with gratitude 
on your birthday 
this rouge roses I send,
tied with a rainbow 
that will never end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 7/6/2024 9:29:00 AM
this is absolutely delightful (especially the imagery) and a moving tribute to your father. i am sure he must be proud of you.
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Date: 6/24/2024 12:25:00 AM
so beautiful and lovely tribute.
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Date: 6/13/2024 6:35:00 AM
So lovely! This is an alluring gift to your Dad on his birthday which will help him see many rainbows in his sky. These lovely wishes waft like a gentle breeze!
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Date: 5/30/2024 12:44:00 PM
WOW!!! I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/tribute to your Dad. I could feel your LOVE in this write for his Birthday. I know he did also. Have A Blessed Day With Love Writing Away..........
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Date: 5/26/2024 9:06:00 AM
awww this is so beautiful and tender.. A lovely tribute.. Happy birthday to your dad..
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JCB Brul
Date: 5/26/2024 9:10:00 AM
Thank you SO.

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