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Placed Seventh in : for Those We Love Poetry Contest Sponsored by Mystic Rose Rose

Those We Love Those we love don`t go away They walk beside us everyday, Night after night they trail our dreams, Often times in midst of our screams; In the solitude of the night The smiles of their sweet face ignite, Smiles of love so sincere and straight, Of love now lost to whims of fate; When we gaze at a mirror fair, Mirror where they oft dressed their hair, Their image before us appear Without a single stamp of fear; They seem to speak as still alive, Care without them, how we survive Guide us along the rightful way, More, during darkness of the day; Their cute voice echoes in our ears As melodic music quite clear, As sweet songs of larks on a tree As the waves of a silent sea; When we gaze at a bright full moon We can eye our beloved soon; Times reaching to hail their birthday, They make their presence felt that day; From the cerulean clear sky Daily on us they cast their eyes, From above, they transmit rose blooms To embalm for a while our rooms; At year`s end, dishes they relished, To be served as tokens, they wish, Their memories ever to shine In our mind till runs out our time; They wait on for our journey`s end The wrathful whims of fate to mend And yearn to meet us in the sky Just side by side with them to lie.

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Date: 7/25/2025 8:10:00 AM
Dear Krishnanand, your beautiful poem is filled with wonderful imagery and rhymes. A soulful and expressive piece weaving loss with appreciation for their spiritual presence still near in dreams, memories and nature. A stunning work. Congratulations for your success in Rose's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 7/26/2025 12:48:00 PM
Thank you poet friend for appreciating the poem and for your kind wishes, which have really raised my spirits up. Wishing you a splendid weekend filled with the blessings of light.
Date: 7/24/2025 10:01:00 AM
Congratulations! Xo
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 7/24/2025 11:45:00 PM
Thank you poet friend for your kind wishes. Sending you greetings and wishes for for a bright day filled with light.
Date: 7/24/2025 4:44:00 AM
Effortless rhymes, beautiful flow throughout. Refreshing dear poet. 'They wait on for our journey`s end' line brought tears, so very delicate. Congratulations on your win. Cheers!!!
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 7/24/2025 11:52:00 PM
Thank you Triveni for appreciating the poem and for your kind wishes. I am sorry if the poem would have led you to shed tears. We are all temporary travellers in this world. At journey`s end we all have to quit this world without taking anything with us, except our good deeds. Wishing you a cheerful journey.
Date: 7/24/2025 4:01:00 AM
Congratulations
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 7/24/2025 11:42:00 PM
Thank you poet friend for your kind wishes. May you have a splendid day.

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