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Rewritten from the essence of A letter from R.S. Dinkar, a famous poet, in his older age.

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Seize the day!?Seize the day,!!?Seize the day!!! Once I cried “carpe diem”—pluck each moment bright— But now I know: no soul can truly seize the day; We can but watch it vanish into night. Time slips through grasping hands, in echoes vast, Like memories we hoard—“This too shall pass.” Before we sense its passing, a thousand moons have passed, Leaving only footprints fading from the glass. Open your heart—learn to forgive, let fractures mend. Time won’t endure; only the love you send Will bloom beyond your time—compassion, gentle, kind— Impressions lasting long after days unwind. We cannot hold on to time, nor merely let it fly. Still, there’s so much waiting—for question, life, reply. By living fully, learning wild and free, From five years old to ninety-five, there's more to be. As age ascends, keep wonder in your gaze, Play games, try tastes untasted—let life amaze. Gather with friends, sip joy’s sweet draft, Find sunlight in the small, and laugh the hearty laugh.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 8/3/2025 10:51:00 AM
Great write. Blessings!
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Date: 7/28/2025 11:25:00 AM
Full of wisdom and good advice, enjoyed reading
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Date: 7/28/2025 8:42:00 AM
Wow, this poem really speaks to the heart. I love how it shifts from "seize the day" to something deeper—living fully with kindness and wonder. So many lines stuck with me, especially about love outlasting time. Beautiful and inspiring!
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Date: 7/27/2025 11:33:00 AM
- Words of wisdom and truth, Jay :) - Words to live by and ponder :) - hugs
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Date: 7/25/2025 6:53:00 AM
Hello Jay, Your poem doesn’t just advise us to seize the day but it teaches us how to see it, feel it, and let it go. A stunning reflection from someone clearly walking the talk. Summer Blessings, Jay, Daniel
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Date: 7/24/2025 10:12:00 PM
Each line in this, is a sweet lesson for the aged and the aging. There is so much wisdom in your words. Nobody can hold time. It will fly. But make use of every moment, open our hearts to love and forgive, to let fractures mend. This goes into my FAVE.
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Date: 7/23/2025 6:22:00 PM
You lifted my old heart with this wonderful poem Jay ! You are so right, we cant hold on to time. The most expensive wrinkle remover wont change the pace of time. Appreciating the wonders around us, is always an amazing thing to do. You definitley described yourself: compassionate, gentle and kind. I am lucky to be able to call you a friend.
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Date: 7/23/2025 5:25:00 PM
A blessing to read, my dear friend. May all that read this poem take heed to the wisdom within. Dare to forgive and begin again. Love and be loved! Bill
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Date: 7/23/2025 4:07:00 PM
your poem has wisdom and insight flowing through it. I agree...we cannot hold onto time. I especially liked the last line...inspirational and uplifting.
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Date: 7/23/2025 3:33:00 PM
Gather with friends, sip joy’s sweet draft, try to do more of this as you grow older Jay, I try on my end lol
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