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Scent of a Creole Woman

Louisiana creole lady
filled my weekend
ghost of lust lingers
my room silent as a flower
scent of powder and perfume
hangs in the air...

The ruins of our pleasure
sound of the sea
pages turning
her nearness enchanted me
perfume of wildflowers
moonlight and dew...

The fragrance of her skin
smell of her shampoo
breezes through as I inhale
the feel of her soft body
and deep wet kisses...

It was if
I had never existed elsewhere
her soft aroma lingers
left upon my rustling sheets...

Tonight I will sleep
on her side of the bed
because it still smells of her...
~ ~ ~ ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/20/2014 8:38:00 PM
truly romantic smiling underneath the rustling sheets this drew for me beautifully buddy
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Date: 8/24/2014 9:25:00 AM
Simply beautiful - amazingly sensuous! Pandita
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Date: 7/31/2014 1:41:00 PM
your senses are sooo alive here, ken... what an appealing work.. huggs
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Ken Carroll
Date: 7/31/2014 3:56:00 PM
Thank you Nette..Lovely to read from you!
Date: 7/28/2014 3:17:00 PM
this is very sensuous and with lovely images. The ending rocks!
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Ken Carroll
Date: 7/28/2014 3:43:00 PM
Thank you for visiting Andrea!
Date: 7/28/2014 1:20:00 PM
Oh...how deliciously sweet this is, Ken. Scents....play a very important role in love making....and in everything else. Lovely write.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 7/28/2014 1:35:00 PM
Thank you Eileen..Always a pleasure to read from you!
Date: 7/28/2014 12:52:00 PM
- Beautiful and romantic, Ken - Sweet dreams in her perfumes pillow :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Ken Carroll
Date: 7/28/2014 12:54:00 PM
thank you Anne for a lovely visit!

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