Scent of a Creole Woman

Louisiana creole lady
filled my weekend
ghost of lust lingers
my room silent as a flower
scent of powder and perfume
hangs in the air...

The ruins of our pleasure
sound of the sea
pages turning
her nearness enchanted me
perfume of wildflowers
moonlight and dew...

The fragrance of her skin
smell of her shampoo
breezes through as I inhale
the feel of her soft body
and deep wet kisses...

It was if
I had never existed elsewhere
her soft aroma lingers
left upon my rustling sheets...

Tonight I will sleep
on her side of the bed
because it still smells of her...
~ ~ ~ ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mcdaid Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 8:38 PM
truly romantic smiling underneath the rustling sheets this drew for me beautifully buddy
Sietesantos Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 9:25 AM
Simply beautiful - amazingly sensuous! Pandita
Onclaud Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 1:41 PM
your senses are sooo alive here, ken... what an appealing work.. huggs
Carroll Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 3:56 PM
Thank you Nette..Lovely to read from you!
Dietrich Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 3:17 PM
this is very sensuous and with lovely images. The ending rocks!
Carroll Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 3:43 PM
Thank you for visiting Andrea!
Manassian Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 1:20 PM
Oh...how deliciously sweet this is, Ken. Scents....play a very important role in love making....and in everything else. Lovely write.
Carroll Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 1:35 PM
Thank you Eileen..Always a pleasure to read from you!
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 12:52 PM
- Beautiful and romantic, Ken - Sweet dreams in her perfumes pillow :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Carroll Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 12:54 PM
thank you Anne for a lovely visit!
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