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You could be my wedding
You could be my call
A vow I make to heaven
Which only by my death shall fall

You could be my sunrise
My moon and my stars
My whole world lighted 
Simply by who you are

You could be my roses
My love notes and cards
Each romantic feeling 
To the depths of my soul and heart

You could be my heaven
Or you could be my hell
Paradise would be nice 
But with you I’d reign in hell,

You could be my winter
You could be my spring
I’d harvest all of summer
And in the fall I’d sing

You are my desire
For which each need is met
Daily waking from dreams of you
Dreams of you I’ve dreamt 



(For all the women on P.S. who need a little romance.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 10/3/2023 7:23:00 AM
Beautifully said with reality of thorns below the petals of love.
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Date: 9/21/2023 5:48:00 PM
Us gals love romance and your poem is certainly that TS. I agree it would be lovely on a card… Belle
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Date: 9/17/2023 6:23:00 AM
Just lovely T.S! Who said romance was dead hehe! Debx
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Date: 9/13/2023 5:52:00 PM
Great use of rhyme and form. The form lends itself to the subject of love.
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Date: 9/12/2023 7:03:00 PM
Thank you. I shall celebrate your tribute to women every Fall. It's worth it! ~with a woman's love..Anaya
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Date: 9/12/2023 5:03:00 PM
This is great, and I agree with it can go in a card.
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Date: 9/12/2023 8:12:00 AM
Lovely... I hope you have fulfilled the needs of those who seek romance..
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Date: 9/12/2023 2:58:00 AM
Ahhh!! Romance so long ago that I had almost forgotten. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 9/11/2023 11:17:00 PM
Love the melody in your poem Dreamy and sweet.Love how you entwined the seasons.Lovely to read you again J.L
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Date: 9/11/2023 8:23:00 PM
Beautiful and so lyrical. I love the flow of this. Reminds me of a song…so melodious
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Date: 9/10/2023 11:47:00 PM
This is going on my valentines card Thanks
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Date: 9/10/2023 5:57:00 PM
This is such a wonderful poem. I love the second stanza, it should be on a Hallmark anniversary card.
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Date: 9/10/2023 5:46:00 AM
Awesome poetry-- splendidly dwelling in love and longing.
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Date: 9/10/2023 2:58:00 AM
Absolutely love this. So romantic. So well conveyed and written. ‘Which only by my death shall fall’- a gorgeous line. I particularly loved the last stanza. Really enjoyed it.Thank you for sharing. Have a great day.
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Date: 9/10/2023 1:16:00 AM
This poem is amazing!! and very relatable! I love how simple this poem is but how it has so much meaning.
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