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You could be my wedding You could be my call A vow I make to heaven Which only by my death shall fall You could be my sunrise My moon and my stars My whole world lighted Simply by who you are You could be my roses My love notes and cards Each romantic feeling To the depths of my soul and heart You could be my heaven Or you could be my hell Paradise would be nice But with you I’d reign in hell, You could be my winter You could be my spring I’d harvest all of summer And in the fall I’d sing You are my desire For which each need is met Daily waking from dreams of you Dreams of you I’ve dreamt (For all the women on P.S. who need a little romance.)

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Date: 10/3/2023 7:23:00 AM
Beautifully said with reality of thorns below the petals of love.
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Date: 9/21/2023 5:48:00 PM
Us gals love romance and your poem is certainly that TS. I agree it would be lovely on a card… Belle
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Date: 9/17/2023 6:23:00 AM
Just lovely T.S! Who said romance was dead hehe! Debx
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Date: 9/13/2023 5:52:00 PM
Great use of rhyme and form. The form lends itself to the subject of love.
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Date: 9/12/2023 7:03:00 PM
Thank you. I shall celebrate your tribute to women every Fall. It's worth it! ~with a woman's love..Anaya
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Date: 9/12/2023 5:03:00 PM
This is great, and I agree with it can go in a card.
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Date: 9/12/2023 8:12:00 AM
Lovely... I hope you have fulfilled the needs of those who seek romance..
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Date: 9/12/2023 2:58:00 AM
Ahhh!! Romance so long ago that I had almost forgotten. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 9/11/2023 11:17:00 PM
Love the melody in your poem Dreamy and sweet.Love how you entwined the seasons.Lovely to read you again J.L
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Date: 9/11/2023 8:23:00 PM
Beautiful and so lyrical. I love the flow of this. Reminds me of a song…so melodious
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Date: 9/10/2023 11:47:00 PM
This is going on my valentines card Thanks
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Date: 9/10/2023 5:57:00 PM
This is such a wonderful poem. I love the second stanza, it should be on a Hallmark anniversary card.
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Date: 9/10/2023 5:46:00 AM
Awesome poetry-- splendidly dwelling in love and longing.
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Date: 9/10/2023 2:58:00 AM
Absolutely love this. So romantic. So well conveyed and written. ‘Which only by my death shall fall’- a gorgeous line. I particularly loved the last stanza. Really enjoyed it.Thank you for sharing. Have a great day.
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Date: 9/10/2023 1:16:00 AM
This poem is amazing!! and very relatable! I love how simple this poem is but how it has so much meaning.
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