Remember This

You could be my wedding
You could be my call
A vow I make to heaven
Which only by my death shall fall

You could be my sunrise
My moon and my stars
My whole world lighted 
Simply by who you are

You could be my roses
My love notes and cards
Each romantic feeling 
To the depths of my soul and heart

You could be my heaven
Or you could be my hell
Paradise would be nice 
But with you I’d reign in hell,

You could be my winter
You could be my spring
I’d harvest all of summer
And in the fall I’d sing

You are my desire
For which each need is met
Daily waking from dreams of you
Dreams of you I’ve dreamt 



(For all the women on P.S. who need a little romance.)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Schiavina Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 7:23 AM
Beautifully said with reality of thorns below the petals of love.
Edmonds  Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 5:48 PM
Us gals love romance and your poem is certainly that TS. I agree it would be lovely on a card… Belle
M  Avatar
September 17, 2023 at 6:23 AM
Just lovely T.S! Who said romance was dead hehe! Debx
Delaney-Barron Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 5:52 PM
Great use of rhyme and form. The form lends itself to the subject of love.
Anaya Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 7:03 PM
Thank you. I shall celebrate your tribute to women every Fall. It's worth it! ~with a woman's love..Anaya
Fisher Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 5:03 PM
This is great, and I agree with it can go in a card.
One Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 8:12 AM
Lovely... I hope you have fulfilled the needs of those who seek romance..
Kendrick Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 2:58 AM
Ahhh!! Romance so long ago that I had almost forgotten. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
Chircop Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 11:17 PM
Love the melody in your poem Dreamy and sweet.Love how you entwined the seasons.Lovely to read you again J.L
Empress Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 8:23 PM
Beautiful and so lyrical. I love the flow of this. Reminds me of a song…so melodious
Stark Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 11:47 PM
This is going on my valentines card Thanks
Brotherton Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 5:57 PM
This is such a wonderful poem. I love the second stanza, it should be on a Hallmark anniversary card.
Pandit Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 5:46 AM
Awesome poetry-- splendidly dwelling in love and longing.
Bowring Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 2:58 AM
Absolutely love this. So romantic. So well conveyed and written. ‘Which only by my death shall fall’- a gorgeous line. I particularly loved the last stanza. Really enjoyed it.Thank you for sharing. Have a great day.
Bird Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 1:16 AM
This poem is amazing!! and very relatable! I love how simple this poem is but how it has so much meaning.
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