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Mellifluous

mellifluous and mesmerizing
a distant melody I hear...

melting my soul softly
with its mellow magic

a flute tune so soothing
sweet and symphonic
transcendental
awakening my spirit
moulding my dampen mind
into a clay diya
spreading love and light -
a light to the realization of
the meaning of my mundane existence
 
as I close my eyes and listen
to this mystic blissful tune
even the Gopis, peacocks, cows and birds
of my mind's mural art
that depicts His divine grandeur
seem to come back to life
and merge with His grace

my muse has lost its metaphors
to portray such a glorious moment
for, the merry chimes of metaphors
are now meek and muffled
hushed and muted
in that dulcet tune that wafts in the air

a distant melody I hear
mellifluous and mesmerizing...

Date: 09/18/2021
"M" Contest New Poems Only Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France

Note:
Diya: A small oil lamp made of clay. 
Gopis: Cow-herd women devoted to Lord Krishna

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Date: 9/22/2021 2:28:00 PM
Ani, congratulations on your win in my M contest with this excellent poem, splendid writing ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 9/20/2021 12:32:00 AM
M -Magic! This is another beautiful poem of yours. So beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/19/2021 7:39:00 PM
Krishna’s flute! So devoutly portrayed! Congrats on your win, Anitha
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Date: 9/19/2021 10:47:00 AM
wow, you took the word mellifluous and you absolutely illustrated it through the words you painted your poetry with. So beautiful and a well deserved first place win, Ani.
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Date: 9/19/2021 8:08:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. I appreciate the explanation of a few of the words used in your lines that are used in your country. Thanks for your visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 9/18/2021 1:25:00 AM
Superb write, Ani. Your poem is so full of imagery and emotions. Bet it will rate high.
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Date: 9/18/2021 12:56:00 AM
Some nice imagism herein Ani.Have a creative weekend
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Date: 9/17/2021 12:40:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful!
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