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Mellifluous

mellifluous and mesmerizing a distant melody I hear... melting my soul softly with its mellow magic a flute tune so soothing sweet and symphonic transcendental awakening my spirit moulding my dampen mind into a clay diya spreading love and light - a light to the realization of the meaning of my mundane existence as I close my eyes and listen to this mystic blissful tune even the Gopis, peacocks, cows and birds of my mind's mural art that depicts His divine grandeur seem to come back to life and merge with His grace my muse has lost its metaphors to portray such a glorious moment for, the merry chimes of metaphors are now meek and muffled hushed and muted in that dulcet tune that wafts in the air a distant melody I hear mellifluous and mesmerizing... Date: 09/18/2021 "M" Contest New Poems Only Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France Note: Diya: A small oil lamp made of clay. Gopis: Cow-herd women devoted to Lord Krishna

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Date: 9/22/2021 2:28:00 PM
Ani, congratulations on your win in my M contest with this excellent poem, splendid writing ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 9/20/2021 12:32:00 AM
M -Magic! This is another beautiful poem of yours. So beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/19/2021 7:39:00 PM
Krishna’s flute! So devoutly portrayed! Congrats on your win, Anitha
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Date: 9/19/2021 10:47:00 AM
wow, you took the word mellifluous and you absolutely illustrated it through the words you painted your poetry with. So beautiful and a well deserved first place win, Ani.
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Date: 9/19/2021 8:08:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. I appreciate the explanation of a few of the words used in your lines that are used in your country. Thanks for your visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 9/18/2021 1:25:00 AM
Superb write, Ani. Your poem is so full of imagery and emotions. Bet it will rate high.
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Date: 9/18/2021 12:56:00 AM
Some nice imagism herein Ani.Have a creative weekend
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Date: 9/17/2021 12:40:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful!
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