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7/22/2025 for Three Options in I Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France

I am lost in a desert without love and I'm hoping for a sign from above. Oh, to be saved by a refreshing sup of clear water from a cool loving cup, but my chances look despairing and dire, and soon Lord, I believe I will expire. In front of me, I see an oasis, but do my eyes deceive without basis? Will its love be my long-lost salvation or just my naive imagination?

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Date: 8/1/2025 4:15:00 PM
Hello dear friend. Nice write - and in rhyme no less. Congratulations Dave! :)
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David Crandall
Date: 8/2/2025 3:56:00 PM
Thanks elle!
Date: 8/1/2025 7:24:00 AM
David, congratulations on your win in my Three Options in I contest, your words are well done, blessings ~
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David Crandall
Date: 8/2/2025 3:55:00 PM
Thanks for the compliment, Constance!
Date: 7/28/2025 11:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write. Never let your eyes deceive you. Have a blessed day with your win................
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David Crandall
Date: 7/29/2025 6:53:00 PM
True Paula, thanks!
Date: 7/22/2025 4:23:00 PM
loved the flow of your words and rhyme. The last two lines left me pondering.
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David Crandall
Date: 7/29/2025 6:53:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! I think that's a good result if you are pondering.
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David Crandall
Date: 7/29/2025 6:53:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! I think that's a good result if you are pondering.

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