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7/22/2025 for Three Options in I Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France

I am lost in a desert without love and I'm hoping for a sign from above. Oh, to be saved by a refreshing sup of clear water from a cool loving cup, but my chances look despairing and dire, and soon Lord, I believe I will expire. In front of me, I see an oasis, but do my eyes deceive without basis? Will its love be my long-lost salvation or just my naive imagination?

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Date: 7/22/2025 4:23:00 PM
loved the flow of your words and rhyme. The last two lines left me pondering.
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