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Written, July 31, 2025/AI Free
For the International Contest, 1400
Sponsor, Brian Strand

240 Strange Nature ideas | nature ...

I feel the f o r e s t the w h i s p e r s sighs EYES watching \\..// I am not alone . . .

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John Fleming

Date: 8/1/2025 3:31:00 PM

Beautifully encapsulated. You sum up, perfectly, how we all feel when walking alone through the forest. Nicely done! :) john

Constance La France
Date: 8/3/2025 6:09:00 PM

John, thank you for the compliment and lovely comment, blessings ~

Robert Pettit

Date: 7/31/2025 3:32:00 PM

In liking this haiku, I know I am not alone.

Constance La France
Date: 8/1/2025 8:18:00 AM

Robert, nice to hear from you, and for commenting on my hiku and the compliment, blessings ~

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 7/31/2025 2:48:00 PM

Lovely, and no, not alone <3 Your haiku is very peaceful, transcending this reader to a place of peace in memories of the forest where my family stayed for five weeks. I never felt alone. Your image of the tree also brought back memories; I truly felt the trees had an awareness of us way out there away from the town on the dirt road where the little home was located. It was very memorable, bringing us an up-close awareness of nature. This is so lovely Contance, as well as artfully captivating <3

Constance La France
Date: 8/1/2025 8:22:00 AM

Bj, thank you so much for the wonderful comment, I have always felt the trees and forest are watching, and thanks for the compliment, appreciate, blessings ~