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As One Together

moon and stars above
warm summer night breeze blowing
arms wrapped around me
closeness makes my body weak
your breath, the warm breeze, I melt

our hearts together
beat now as one forever
till death do us part

Copyright © Carol Sunshine Brown | Year Posted 2012

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Valerie Staton Date: 1/27/2019 7:13:00 AM Very well written! Login to Reply

Christine Malliaros Date: 4/28/2015 10:38:00 AM Beautiful!!!! Login to Reply

Apoorva Patrikar Date: 9/10/2012 9:29:00 AM wonderful :) Login to Reply

Nii-Ayi Solomon Date: 6/18/2012 6:11:00 AM This is a beautiful poem...it reminds me of my poem till death do us apart. Login to Reply

David Scott Date: 6/8/2012 1:28:00 PM nice peace the words say it all x david scott Login to Reply

Shaz Cheesman Date: 5/23/2012 4:35:00 AM wow Carol - short and very sweet - loved it. Login to Reply

Danielle Lewis Date: 5/8/2012 8:33:00 PM refreshing... very beautiful! Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 5/8/2012 10:08:00 AM I have no expression for this one except saying lovely poem of two hearts together. Loved always, bl Login to Reply

Rochelle Smith Date: 5/6/2012 1:43:00 PM nice a d ty for the welcome carol Login to Reply

Debbie Duncan Date: 4/19/2012 5:42:00 PM Oh I love this poem,,, I can see why it won first place ;} very nice Carol Login to Reply

April Lovett-Bradford Date: 4/18/2012 3:02:00 PM Very beautiful Carol, Congrats on your first Place win ;0) Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 4/12/2012 5:56:00 AM A beauty Carol, congratulations on your first place win with this awesome piece :) love Wilma Login to Reply

Gautami Phookan Date: 4/10/2012 8:49:00 PM Isn't it so simple to love!! Carol, you've beautifully shown the pureness of this divine feeling.. Congrats on a very well deserved win and love always !!! Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 4/10/2012 2:27:00 PM Carol, congrats on your 1st place win with this lovely, romantic write! Love, Kim Login to Reply

Diana-Marie Bombardieri Date: 4/10/2012 12:18:00 PM Beautiful. Congrats on your win Carol:) Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/10/2012 12:07:00 PM Thank you everyone. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Deborah Burch Date: 4/10/2012 12:39:00 AM Awww...Congratulations Carol!!! Great win!!! big huggsss,love deb Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 4/9/2012 6:44:00 PM Truly lovely. Congratulations on your first place win. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 4/9/2012 6:31:00 PM So romantic Carol!! Congrad's on your win Light & love Login to Reply

Jon Arno Date: 4/9/2012 4:45:00 PM Another beauty Carol :) Congratulations on your winning entry Love, Jon Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/9/2012 1:55:00 PM Congrats on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/9/2012 8:40:00 AM congrats Carol on a grand first place win for Mesh of Forms contest with a truly brilliant expression of words.. trust u enjoyed a lovely Easter day in Resurrection Power luv.. Login to Reply

Lester Lagdamen Date: 4/3/2012 6:02:00 AM A very nice poem. I felt it :) Login to Reply

L.Ruby Meyer Date: 4/2/2012 12:40:00 PM Thank you for this poem Carol! Sometimes it seems the fewest of words can have a most profound impact on emotion. x Peace, Ruby Login to Reply

M.I.A . Date: 3/29/2012 9:17:00 PM wow, this is beautiful Carol. good luck on the contest Login to Reply

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